hmmm, dunno what to say- i like the placement and colours on the grey shirt :)

I like the grey one too!

it looks alot better on the gray than it does on the yellow

I think this would look good on navy.

Grey just as it is.

i love it! the gray one is awsome!!

hahah grey seems to be the obvious choice :D

I like it to the side on grey

Cool design

i'm not big on the splatter, i see it everywhere, it just doesn't WOW me... needs work, maybe something more original... not trying to be mean but... come on.

Ok, so MaguMaster... I am seriously about to start a HUGE vendetta against you. Every time I see you post it's to bitch about some aspect of a design that doesn't need changing. Also, none of your criticism is anywhere near helpful, which just pisses me off even more because it shows that you yourself can't design for crap and therefore shouldn't be criticising these designs in the first place!

Friendliness be Damned!!

Magus is usually right though... just being honest.

Splat! I like the way you've done this. high scsore from me!

BTW I like the yellow, but prefer the off-centre position.

make a girl blowing her brains out with a gun and have these butterflies and splatter as the blood

on grey, off-center please!

colors really pop on the grey shirt. looks perfect off center



hope this gets printed

bahahhaah at ikarusmyancestor!

oh btw tesco, are you being sarcastic?

this would also look great on a white tee, or perhaps a mint green one. lovely.

That'll learn that butterfly to flutterby and be swatted to death on my chest! Man, who knew butterflies bleed so beautifully?

thanks :)

i love it :]]

specially on grey

i wld love to see this printed x

yay everybody is liking my design :D

Grey for sure. Love the design and the idea and the execution. Well done!

Grey looks nicer,yup. It's really really nice!

grey, and on the side, nice design!!

Placement better on dark gray, nice design.

Ikarusmyancestor, what does the ability to design have to do with having an eye for what works? MagusMaster has the right to give his opinion, and usually it's what needs to be said, whether we like it or not.



I can tell you whether a movie is good or bad, and what was wrong/right with it, but wouldn't dream of attempting to make one myself. I can tell what clothing looks great and what looks dorky, even though I can't sew to save my life. And I'll bet most gymnastics coaches couldn't possibly do the routines they expect their young charges to accomplish.



I'd love to be an artist, but I know my skills are lacking. So I sit on the sidelines and occasionally offer my opinion. I would be just as critical of my own creations, if not more so.



We all should take honest criticisms to heart, in order to improve. Creativity is born from limitations. If Magus says the splatter effect is overdone these days, perhaps the artist could say, "hmm, how could I accomplish the same idea in a new way?" That's where you get the WOW factor...using the restrictions to force the birth of something original. I've taken enough classes in both art and creative writing to know that placing a boundary is the absolute best way to draw out an artist's true talents.

Nice design and colour, keep it up!

id buy the grey one

the grey makes the colors pop more, because i think since grey is more subtle the colors are just... wow. But i feel its a tad bit plain for me.

Love it! I'd get it in an instant :D

this is great!! i like it on grey and yellow, but with the grey shirts placement.

Also like the placement and colors on the grey! I'd get it!

tesco was refering to the long out of print "flowers in the attic" tee. look it up.

http://www.threadless.com/product/114/Flowers_in_the_Attic

yeah i know he is talking about flowers in the attic

Well thank you Mephitine. Finally someone has justified criticism to a point that hopefully everyone can understand. As a design student, I find my ideas criticized a lot, and you take it as constructively as you can.



Not only that, everyone has their own opinion about things. Oh well.



As for you Againstxme, I personally like it on the gray, off center. It makes your eyes move a bit more than the vertical design.



I absolutely love this design.

print it... 5$... i would not buy... i am gonna buy it!!!

Love it! I prefer the grey, I think it off-sets the colors better.

grey ftw! :d

i like it but im not feeling the grey

grey

i like it. but move the design closer to the side. :)