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everytime it rains a little cloud dies

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by againstxme
okay well this has been up in the forums for a few days and this is what came out :).

i got the original idea from my sister one rainy day-

enjoy!
kariannbear
kariannbear on May 03 '07
I like it. I think it's cute. $4
Deathcab_cutie
Deathcab_cutie on May 03 '07
The clouds are cute!

but i would like better on a lighter blue.
fuzzyfroggy
fuzzyfroggy on May 03 '07
it needs to say that, "everytime it rains a little dies on it" then it would make more sense cuz noone will get it
woozerkristen
woozerkristen on May 03 '07
I was thinking the same thing. WIth the text it works, or maybe at least keeping the size/perspective consistent -- it looks like 3 different clouds like this.
againstxme
againstxme on May 03 '07
okay well firstly, i know that if i did write it on there people would slate it! and also, the size of the clouds can't be consistent because that would make less sense, i think it's pretty self explantory
ChloroformPerfume13
ChloroformPerfume13 on May 03 '07
I think it works without the text! I like this, but I think if the shirt was lighter it would be better. 4!
polkaxdot
polkaxdot on May 03 '07
it works without the text- i like the expressions- classic
professorE
professorE on May 03 '07
i think it's pretty self explantory



It's getting smaller because it's losing moisture?



Am I right?
cronobeaker
   cronobeaker on May 03 '07
Sorry dude, If I was walking past in the street glancing at it, it wouldn't make sense at all.
MeeseNotMoose
MeeseNotMoose on May 03 '07
I think it makes sence. I like it. and I'd definently buy it ^_^
notesandhours
notesandhours on May 03 '07
Hmm.. I agree with adding the text in, I thought the other cloud was laughing at him because he'd wet himself.. and the other one perhaps died of embarrassment. Please don't forget, although you as the submitter may know what's going on, it's not safe to assume it's always self explaintory.
nostrils2001
nostrils2001 on May 03 '07
You left out the bit where new clouds are born when the sun comes out...
againstxme
againstxme on May 03 '07
yes you are right professor :P
lauraaaaaa
lauraaaaaa on May 04 '07
haha you see that middle cloud? i can do the exact same thing with my eyebrows and my friends take the mickey :(



i like this lots
MrDelirious
MrDelirious on May 04 '07
arrows between the clouds perhaps?
colourSCIENTIST
colourSCIENTIST on May 04 '07
i like :)



i didn't even read the title before lookin at the design and i knew exactly what was going on. no text is good.
gothicblonde42
gothicblonde42 on May 05 '07
I love the expression on the middle cloud. And I like it without the text, too.
Alexandra Marie
Alexandra Marie on May 05 '07
In critiques he got told to lose the text and to graduate the sizes - changes which, I think, helped the design a great deal.



I like it. Nice job responding to the comments in the critique.
queen_of_agony
queen_of_agony on May 06 '07
Nice and simple..I like it
bankx
bankx on May 07 '07
so cute
drpaule
drpaule on May 08 '07
Good idea. It must have the text, or improve the presentation. Maybe the "dead" cloud above the raining cloud? Maybe some "flow" lines?
soundofmyownrequiem
soundofmyownrequiem on May 08 '07
The middle cloud is soooo cute!
ClisteGealtach
ClisteGealtach on May 09 '07
as stated, love the middle cloud's "dood?! wtf?" expression, just too perfect... I like it without the text, it is decipherable with a bit of thought... and I personally don't like everything to be spoon-fed to me
krillinhazuki
krillinhazuki on May 09 '07
I lol'd
againstxme
againstxme on May 10 '07
hmmm "i lol'd" that would be kinda like 'i laughed out loud'd' hhehe :P
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bubblespoof
bubblespoof on May 13 '07
adorable
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