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it needs to say that, "everytime it rains a little dies on it" then it would make more sense cuz noone will get it
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I was thinking the same thing. WIth the text it works, or maybe at least keeping the size/perspective consistent -- it looks like 3 different clouds like this.
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I think it works without the text! I like this, but I think if the shirt was lighter it would be better. 4!
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haha you see that middle cloud? i can do the exact same thing with my eyebrows and my friends take the mickey :(
i like this lots |
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i like :)
i didn't even read the title before lookin at the design and i knew exactly what was going on. no text is good. |
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In critiques he got told to lose the text and to graduate the sizes - changes which, I think, helped the design a great deal.
I like it. Nice job responding to the comments in the critique. |
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Good idea. It must have the text, or improve the presentation. Maybe the "dead" cloud above the raining cloud? Maybe some "flow" lines?
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About my design
i got the original idea from my sister one rainy day-
enjoy!