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I don't like how the (salami) looks hollow where the eyes and other detail is. Maybe use another color in there. You have some to spare, no?
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The samurai & wind-like lines surrounding him are A+ awesome. The salami looks like twat in comparison. With the style of your samurai, I'd like to see a more 'serious' concept. 3
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I love the onomatopoeia. Not sure about the samurai. Hmm, I'm seeing a trend crazy spelling of themes in your illustration! Diphthongs!
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Fantastic design. Love it. But I'd change the samurai's outfit to white, then change the fat in the sausage to white as well. Then you could put the thing on any color shirt. 5$
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the samurai and salami (i thought it was a luchador...) have the same tone. it's like this whole message that we are what we eat or something. hrmph.
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Reminds me of that really old SNL skit with the samurai working at the deli. Anyway, like it, not sure about the text.
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