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Ik like the idea of flying paper birds but I think this design is a bit too cluttered. Nice instructions though, I love making these :)
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the idea is fantastic, but i'm not sure i understand the organization. maybe it would be better more centered and horizontal? maybe the fly-away bird could be on the back or sleeve?
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I kinda of with the first 8 steps werent in a straight row and were more organic like the rest of the shirt
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there isn't enough contrast between the colors so its hard to notice whats going on, black and white maybe?
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I like how the first steps are straight in a row, to me, it kind of reinforces the imagry of going from a blank, flat piece of paper into something more exciting!
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i love the design, but i wish the background was a different color so it stood out more (though I might be biased; im not usually one for pastels)
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i love the idea behind the shirt...but really, i think if you had just figure one in a corner or on the back and then the finished crane with the other birds as the main visual that'd be better...
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i like it... and i think it looks good on a shirt... but i dont think id wear it... still very solid 5
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