Here. My first Submission. Hope you guys like it. It's a personal motto that I though might work on a shirt.

funny i guess... its just not for my taste

the stripes on the right side of the awning dont match the rest of the stripes. the style of the door is different than the floormat, you should have kept that style going.

it's awful, why did they acept this?

yeah not my tastes.
could do with some improving.

not horrible. cool idea

Not as funny as I think you thought it was.

Good idea but it needs some fleshing out. Try the critique section. :)

Bit crap isn't it, the line thickness varies, the perspective is off in different areas, sizing is uneven... the joke sucks aswell, I say that as I don't get it, and i'm sure most of my mates woudn't aswell.

Overall sorry it needs some work mate.

good slogan, poor design.

whoa

definetly needs work. nothing here goes well together.

It's a great motto to live by, just didn't translate well.
It seems like it belongs in a lonely person's cubicle next to the "Hang in there, Baby" kitten poster.
It's a good state of mind, but when you see it and spell it all out, it's really, REALLY corny.