Siren
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Apr 23 '07
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i like mermaids.
But maybe she should have something covering her boobs. |
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harpo25 on Apr 23 '07 large size at
http://www.flickr.com/photos/harpo25/465851119/ really large size http://farm1.static.flickr.com/191/465851119_1b9eac7ddc_o.jpg |
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Dunno if you'll get boobs on Threadless...
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her body is like wrinklyish and her boobs are soft like a babys bottom. lol i dunno
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Boobs rock!
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i like the boobs, but its missing something. maybe another color?
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Her tits are a little too high, even for perky.
One thing that's definitely missing are her pupils. |
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I've got nothing against boobs, but I wouldn't wear a shirt out in public with naked chicks on it...cover them up...and yeah, the breasts are too high...otherwise, it's good...!
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You could get away with this if she didn't have nipples, I think.
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erm, she's a siren - hence the skull, the pupil-less eyes and emaciated look. She's EVIL!
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i love the idea of a siren on a shirt!!! but i think the majority of us would have a problem with bare boobs on a shirt. her body is perhaps a lil wrinkly, make it smooth and sleek, but cover the breasts with something wretched, like torn, ragged cloth or sharp shells or sumthing. i love the idea, and the skull :)
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Can she hear the ocean?
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I know that everyone has problems with the boobs, but please consider what sirens were in mythology and how they have been traditionally portrayed and the boobs make sense
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besides, I likes me some boobies
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i think you can get away w/ making this bigger on the shirt
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after reading the comments
she's not wrinkled, she's got tons of muscle because she swims all the time her boobs are pert because they float in the water due to the lack of gravity and maybe she's listening to the sounds of the land |
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Yes, tons of muscle but the way they've been drawn makes her look wrinkled. I think she'd look better without her rib outlines, less lines around her colar bone, and if her breasts were not so high. Gravity or no gravity, they are positioned too high on her body. Its not normal. Maybe a different background colour to make it stand out more? Overall though, its a great design.
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something is wrong... I don't know what.
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It's a great beginning, I love the image and the idea but it feels like a rough draft. It's too tight... it needs to flow more, maybe a bit more stylized and free. Loosen it up, make it a bit more graphic and less illustrative.
Keep going, I think this will be a great shirt. |
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harpo25 on Apr 24 '07 thanks chell& the others!
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I only think it even approaches wrinkly around the neck area, but I like it, I think it adds to the whole insane murderous sea wench thing.
Perhaps you could just make the bottom outline of the boobs a little less rounded, so it looks like they're attached more realistically, no matter where they float. I like the whole thing, I think it's just dark and crazy and feminine enough. EXCEPT! One thing I can't stand is the pattern on the hair and the tail fin. Everything seems really cool and consistent except for those patterns; which just make those areas seem flat and weird. Change those and I'd probably buy it. |
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what is with the sudden subs of naked women?!
theyre taking over, man!!! i wouldnt wear naked people on me out in public. so, lets get some censorship here. =] |
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Needs some shells or coconuts on those sweater cows.
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28 days later
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sensorship is for P--sies!
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Dammit they got Me!
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