Threadless T-Shirts - Moveable Feast V2

Moveable Feast V2 by dacat

Scoring finished:

536 days ago

Submitted on:

Apr 20 '07

Scored by:

2,437 people

Comments:

61 comments

Final average score:

2.23 out of 5

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Changed the design a bit according to sub'ed critique, should I re-submit this or no?

migus on Apr 20 '07

This is gorgeous!

WalkingAlong on Apr 20 '07

This is better than the first one. The streams of light look amazing.

MR_DAVE on Apr 20 '07

i like the water effect you have done, but everything else is pretty simplistic...and also fish with dolphins swimming around is pretty lame.....

vixyish on Apr 20 '07

should I re-submit this or no?

Um... you did re-submit it. Neither of your submissions were in the critique section.

dacat on Apr 20 '07

Oops, this was supposed to be in the critique section, oh well!

hoosier7awrestlr on Apr 20 '07

i like this better

erin_everlasting on Apr 20 '07

this is so much better!!! i love the rays of light and how now the ocean is differentiated from the sky. much much better!!! well done

Monkey III on Apr 20 '07

I love the light and the water. The rest does seem a bit weird.

Sunshine69 on Apr 20 '07

I love this!

Kleatus on Apr 20 '07

that is just beautiful

Stevethegreat on Apr 20 '07

did you watch Blue Planet too?

karenlynn79 on Apr 20 '07

this is really beautiful and the light looks great

murgles on Apr 20 '07

HURRAH!!! Your new shading is absolutely nifty $5!! Much better than the old one :D

The Wee Straggler on Apr 20 '07

Ooh, this is much better than the last one.

kooky love on Apr 21 '07

GREAT $5

bsweber on Apr 21 '07

this is very nice. i think the lighting effect def helps. $5

FRICKINAWESOME on Apr 21 '07

Wow....a resubbed design that takes its criticisms to heart and fixes everything that was wrong with it and spruces up everything that was already steller! A 4$ for this one, fanatastic job on the idea and to listening to the valid critiques...

kuber on Apr 21 '07

I miss the bright orange fish! to be honest I think your first design was 'purer' if that makes sense. Now I'm getting distracted by your admittedly nifty light beams and I'm not sure that's a good thing. Good work, though!

Alexandra Marie on Apr 21 '07

Much better.

avalanche_lily on Apr 21 '07

Love bait balls.

Nice work.

lenoircouture on Apr 21 '07

jesus i LOVE this. the shimmery water action is pure sex

ChloroformPerfume13 on Apr 21 '07

Oh, wow... it's gorgeous... Much better than the first (although I liked that one too!). I love the shimmery water!

neverwakingsleep on Apr 21 '07

hmm i just saw this on planet earth the mini series.

dacat on Apr 21 '07

Yup my old sub was based on Planet Earth, this is a new version, thanks for the comments!

Kimmyrox on Apr 22 '07

I liked the last one better but this is nice too, 4.

lunchboxbrain on Apr 22 '07

the water looks incredible! 4

bowlesy on Apr 22 '07

This is awesome now! The light on the water really makes it

N2O on Apr 22 '07

I just saw this on "Planet Earth" this morning on Discovery. Very cool design!

theurbanraptor on Apr 22 '07

did i already say this was good?
well i'll say it again.
its really good

kiLLyou on Apr 22 '07

HELL YEAH $5

FlicketySplit on Apr 22 '07

FANTASTIC! i like it so much more now! $5

FlicketySplit on Apr 22 '07

seriously, i really like this

Ewidge on Apr 22 '07

Ooo! I like what you've done with it for version 2.

The subject is a little esoteric, but I think you've presented it quite well. This is the one.

Elithetubaguy on Apr 22 '07

I like how the blue-white gradient kinda looks like jean material. I don't know why, but little details are things that I like.

Elithetubaguy on Apr 22 '07

it's more like blue- light blue gradient, sorry.

Jemae on Apr 23 '07

Pretty! 5$! =)

tyz on Apr 23 '07

Oooh, sweet use of half-toning. It'll look perfect from a distance if it's printed on a t-shirt. I prefer this revision to the original!

warwickswr on Apr 23 '07

Better on the resub. Great job.

warwickswr on Apr 23 '07

By the way, Planet Earth in HD was orgasmic.

ZombieFood on Apr 23 '07

This is gorgeous...a definite improvement on the first submission...good job!

pkraider502 on Apr 23 '07

Planet Earth is AWESOME!
stellar 4

sherleybee on Apr 23 '07

wow. but i think there are a few too many fish...

SoCoDivka on Apr 23 '07

You came leaps and bounds from the last one. I'm a diver, and this totally speaks to me. Nice!

atwisk on Apr 23 '07

too fruity for me

ajsolid84 on Apr 23 '07

Much better than the other version! Good modifications.

nikkaay on Apr 23 '07

zomg. amazing.

ilovecuttles on Apr 24 '07

awesome! bait balls rock!

ixxmmmxxi on Apr 24 '07

i don't like the color of the fish.
they look like spare hands...or something freakish.
but other than that, pretty~

jenables on Apr 24 '07

i liked the old one better! it was more abstract and not so difinitve. this one is cool, though!

the4fingerd on Apr 25 '07

wow i love this! i love the lighting $5

pigleepoo on Apr 25 '07

this is definitely a great shirt. wow. i like the changes you've made from your previous sub - your design has been enhanced threefold. that's awesome. can't wait to see your next idea!

arabiantealeaves on Apr 25 '07

excellent lighting!

gamejunkie on Apr 25 '07

absolutely fantastic 5$

Rathany on Apr 26 '07

Now I can easily tell what is going on :)

Deathcab_cutie on Apr 26 '07

This one is awesomeness!

sunnyrainbows on Apr 27 '07

too tourist-shop?

dacat on Apr 27 '07

Aw, sunnyrainbows, I hope not!

ashnicole on Apr 27 '07

beautiful though it looks like something i would buy at the aquarium store

pedro c on Apr 27 '07

Great illustration!

driversideimpact on Apr 27 '07

What sells this design is the halftone pattern creating the light reflections on the water. Without it I think the design would be too flat. Nice touch!

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