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I like the size. If it was any smaller than it would be difficult to see her face. Good color choice. I'd buy this.
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Interesting design. I'd like it alot better if her skirt was a bit shorter and the jelly-fish-ness started a bit higher up. Also, I agree about her right arm being odd.
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I love the artwork, but I would probably like the shirt better if she were more towards the bottom corner, perhaps? I would have to see how it looks. 4
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def fix the arm. i i've never been a fan of the emo looking girls at all, but aside from HER the rest of the design roooolz
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thank for all the comments...nobody in the critique section mentioned that the arm is odd....now I think you are right...anyway...hope you like it...:-)
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Colors & idea are lovely. Agree that I'd like to see more jellyfish-ness as part of the girl herself, not just tacked on to the bottom of her dress. And yes the arm is freaky - is it supposed to be?
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i think her hair should mimic the rest of the design i think the pig tails are a little out of place maybe floating up as if she were descending through the water.....i don't know...it's just me
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I'm thoroughly digging the design and colors! However, her right arm makes me cringe a little-- it looks like it's on backwards! That's just a small amount of line work, though.
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I like it, but I'd buy it if her arm was fixed and if her hair looked floaty, as if it were underwater too.
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Usually I don't like the "girl on a shirt" designs, but this is lovely. The lines are so fluid. Very pretty.
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