Threadless T-Shirts - Jill's View

Jill's View by jrmasm

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463 days ago

Submitted on:

Apr 12 '07

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2,384 people

Comments:

47 comments

Final average score:

2.57 out of 5

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evangelinereed on Apr 12 '07

i really love this as an idea -- i'm a sucker for "into the woods"-y type stuff -- but i don't think i'd wear this. 4

The Wee Straggler on Apr 12 '07

I love all the cool bits of detail you have in the background. There is a lot going on in this image, in a good way. The kid does not immediately read as Jack minus Jill, but the other Mother Goose stuff makes it work anyway. My only suggestion would be to put a crack to show he has "broke his crown" Oh, and I'd like to see it on a blue shirt. *5*

Sunshine69 on Apr 12 '07

broke his crown doesnt' mean he literally is wearing a crown on his head... it means he cracked his skull. I like it though.

all1e on Apr 12 '07

clever. 4.

jrmasm on Apr 12 '07

Yes, Sunshine69 I actually knew that. To me, artistically, it helped sell the character more.

The Wee Straggler on Apr 12 '07

Agreed 100% jrmasm. The crown sells it big time. You apparently need to point out that cows can't literally jump over the moon though too.

Dan in The 518 on Apr 12 '07

Holy jesus. This shirt is amazing.

chelly on Apr 12 '07

i'm in love with the top third of this sub

The Touch Feel on Apr 12 '07

very very very magical. great art, really, could be a poster or something.

kingforaday on Apr 12 '07

art is cool but i dont think you had the right perspective
$4

Bowtie on Apr 12 '07

Perhaps a different colour tho? all the same 4$

J-Ray on Apr 13 '07

Jack was pushed!!

bloodblockade on Apr 13 '07

Mark Burgess Levitating with Vodka and Nikes.

jpiatt on Apr 13 '07

I think this is an amazing drawing. I only have one problem with it on a shirt....it's too boxy.

It looks great in your presentation cause you cut it off. But on the shirt it'll look boxed in and strange. Boxed in designs don't look real great on shirts.

Lemontoast on Apr 13 '07

wow, i really like the concept. While I realize my opinion means little, if I could suggest a little touchup on the right foot. Otherwise, I kinna would like to maybe see some arms in there, it always seemed a little fishy how Jack suffers head trauma and Jill just had a slight ‘tumble’

renfrew on Apr 13 '07

I agree with ipiatt.

Finish the tree on the left and clean up the other stuff on the sides and have it floating on the shirt.

jrmasm on Apr 13 '07

Lemontoast- about the right foot- I have absolutely no illusions that my stuff will get printed, so when when my 3 year old decided to help me draw the right foot, I left some of it in as her contribution. She was proud of it.

OnePercentDanish on Apr 13 '07

loves the clouds!... I hope You win for once. If it's unique styles they're after, Youve got it in the bag!

msmouse on Apr 13 '07

fun images! (despite Jack's trauma)

cbuchholz on Apr 13 '07

Looks great!! I love your textures and all the little touches, such as the 3 men in the tub in the background! 5$

carolann12582 on Apr 13 '07

this would be great for threadless kids

lunchboxbrain on Apr 13 '07

not diggin how it just cuts off on the right hand side. brilliant otherwise.

ekaj47 on Apr 13 '07

yup very well done - taper off the edges and its golden

Lemontoast on Apr 13 '07

Hey now, i wasn't trying ot be mean to anyone or anything. Just trying to say that the right foot seemed a little off. You can tell your kid to keep post 'em cause one day she is going to wake up and be an amazing artist (especially if this what she can do at 3).

Hairy Dracula on Apr 13 '07

Great style! $5

Velvet Jones on Apr 13 '07

Very clever! $5

I love pointillism.

BlueandYellow on Apr 13 '07

ha, thats cute $4

redsugar on Apr 13 '07

Nice.

backtozero on Apr 14 '07

amazing illustration!

Petanca on Apr 14 '07

I like what you do

FRICKINAWESOME on Apr 14 '07

This was Jill's view for about two seconds until she cam tumbling after! Very cool scene you have set up, but like jpiatt said, the boxiness really detracts from the infinite fairytale landscape you have drawn. Still, fantastic idea and very crazy but effective angle to draw from. 3.

haruhaiku on Apr 14 '07

Great unexpected angle! Very well drawn even if you dont like that foot. The storybook subject lends some give and take on perfect realism i think. So well ececuted! I'd love to give this to my little cousin!!