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TheloniusMnk
TheloniusMnk on Apr 10 '07
I could actually do without the little instruction tag. I think inside the grenade could use some work. The monochromatic thing isn't quite working out. Definitely not on white, and lose the signature logo. That's generally frowned upon around here.

Sorry, I know that sounds like a lot of complaints, but the design interests me. I wouldn't bother with suggestions otherwise.
Toop6
Toop6 on Apr 10 '07
Keep the tag, makes the design complete imo.
Frank Vice
Frank Vice on Apr 10 '07
i thought this was spires lawl
dnangel111
dnangel111 on Apr 11 '07
love the concept. Maybe on beige, or something of that sort.

Lose the tag. Somehow.
kamisch42
kamisch42 on Apr 11 '07
I like the tag, but it's rather wordy for such a small space...maybe condense what's written in it, like take out the instructions, but keep the label & warning? Not sure...without the tag, I might not've figured out the point to what I just thought was a pretty design.
erin_everlasting
erin_everlasting on Apr 11 '07
i love this just as it is :)
moodshine
moodshine on Apr 11 '07
i think this looks great on white.
TheZeroKid
TheZeroKid on Apr 11 '07
I like it the way it is. $4
Yabi Kuro
Yabi Kuro on Apr 11 '07
I LOVE IT THE WAY IT IS but I spy some self-promotion label next to the grenade. That's a HUGE no-no. It takes the design from a $5 to a 4. So take that off.
wotto
   wotto on Apr 11 '07
I really like this - good idea well executed - good work soldier 5
wotto
   wotto on Apr 11 '07
one thing - get rid of the marijuana leaves - far too cliche. then I'll 5$ it
henry_brazil
henry_brazil on Apr 11 '07
Wow, thatīs surprising! When the design was on critique, everybody told me quite the oposite. I had six other models in diferent colors and everybody told me to sub it in white... As for the tag, I like it. Itīs just a detail, really... as for the sig, it doesnīt supose to be on the shirt as shown. That was my mistake! So the sig is definitly off.
Thanks for all votes, critiques and compliments so far.
Cheers, H.
BigODrummer
BigODrummer on Apr 11 '07
Kinda looks like a perfume bottle.
Xtin Sane
Xtin Sane on Apr 11 '07
Maybe you simplify the tag on the front, and put the detailed tag on the sleeve or the back on shoulder instead...
lofty softy
   lofty softy on Apr 11 '07
cool. really well made.
Lowfat
Lowfat on Apr 11 '07
awesome
EbbaP
EbbaP on Apr 11 '07
I think it looks great! Happy thoughts... :)
Skinny1
Skinny1 on Apr 11 '07
Love the design. I like the tag.
harpo25
harpo25 on Apr 11 '07
sweeeet stuff!
henry_brazil
henry_brazil on Apr 11 '07
Thanks, guys!
Lily-n-Parker
Lily-n-Parker on Apr 11 '07
take the pot leaves off and i'd love it
celestialfairie
celestialfairie on Apr 11 '07
nooooo to the pot! definately nooooo!!! and same to the tag. maybe add some flowers to it. but i absolutely adore the whole idea of it! especially the colors!
acmind
acmind on Apr 11 '07
Great Job Henry
pixievix
pixievix on Apr 11 '07
I wish the grenade were less round and more oblong/grenade-shaped, & I agree it might be cooler with more colors.
henry_brazil
henry_brazil on Apr 11 '07
I kinda agree to take the MJ leaves off... And I like the idea of having flowers instead the instruction tag... Could be done for sure. But can I change a sub?
JéF...
JéF... on Apr 11 '07
uso fácil!$
elgrandeloco
elgrandeloco on Apr 11 '07
Makes me think of the fancy-schmancy parfum bottles. Which, oddly enough, I love. Instructions should go. Leaving something like that for the wearer to explain starts up a conversation that everyone should have. $5.
TrnSmleShiftRpt
TrnSmleShiftRpt on Apr 11 '07
looks like cinderella's carriage
_JULIA_
_JULIA_ on Apr 12 '07
ive gotta have it...the instruction tag is the best part :D
good one bro
_JULIA_
_JULIA_ on Apr 12 '07
ive gotta have it...the instruction tag is the best part :D
good one bro
somnambular
somnambular on Apr 12 '07
The whole peace and lurve granola crunchy bit isn't really my deal, but I must say that the design of the grenade is stunning.
BrewHaHa
BrewHaHa on Apr 12 '07
it doesn't look much like a grenade, it looks more like a perfume spritzer...
Kate.G
Kate.G on Apr 12 '07
^^ that's what I thought it was
Crumbling_Butterfly
Crumbling_Butterfly on Apr 12 '07
Like it!
But it loks too much like a perfume flacon.
shopgirlkomodo
shopgirlkomodo on Apr 12 '07
want one.......
all1e
all1e on Apr 12 '07
1. sorry but there are too many designs that deal with war and peace.
henry_brazil
henry_brazil on Apr 12 '07
We need peace, sorry.
Sonsonatta
Sonsonatta on Apr 13 '07
I like it but red looks like blood - peace should be another color maybe??
ArtByKinga
ArtByKinga on Apr 13 '07
I like the idea... but I agree looks like a perfume bottle, not a grenade.... but very interesting and creative!
copperangel360
copperangel360 on Apr 13 '07
Awesome!
Cici
Cici on Apr 13 '07
I was going to say been done but this, I like
Tonteau
   Tonteau on Apr 13 '07
Cool!
kaelin
kaelin on Apr 13 '07
i love love love the colours and the style, but wouldnt wear it because of the peace concept and the smilies :( but its so pretty..but its so cheesy..but its so pretty..but..
henry_brazil
henry_brazil on Apr 13 '07
Cheesy! Yes!!! :)
what whaaat
what whaaat on Apr 13 '07
i don't see how you would ever read the text on the actual shirt
maybe just a peace sign, or the word? something simpler..
love the colors and everything else though!
Kaden
Kaden on Apr 14 '07
love the idea, but i agree that it looks like a perfume bottle (with blood)... :s but if the red was substituted with another color, i'd buy it
Buclkes and or Straps
Buclkes and or Straps on Apr 14 '07
wow $5
BobbyAnderson
BobbyAnderson on Apr 15 '07
were you trying to make perfume bottle with blood!?
tehanna
tehanna on Apr 15 '07
love it love it love it. I don't like white though
tehanna
tehanna on Apr 15 '07
and it doesn't look like a perfume bottle, who ever said that is an ass
shibby558899
shibby558899 on Apr 15 '07
Tehanna:

jason_wesli
jason_wesli on Apr 16 '07
hit the deck!
BigODrummer
BigODrummer on Apr 16 '07
Yes tehanna, this probably doesn't look like your vanilla scented-much like a stripper-body spray-aerosol can but if you will recall from your high school history class (which you are only a year removed from!), there were fancy bottles that looked just liked this that had perfume in them.

But on the bright side, every thing you learned in Bitchology 101 is still fresh on your tiny brain.
tuktman
tuktman on Apr 16 '07
i really like this, id lose the hash leaves, its a bit like... hey everyone i smoke hash!! but the instructions are cool
grypesagon
grypesagon on Apr 16 '07
skrew the chimes. keep the instruction tag. I wish it wasn't on white personally. Though I can see why it works well. I'd kinda like to see it on light grey
henry_brazil
henry_brazil on Apr 16 '07
Since a lot of people said something about the shirt color, hereīs the other options I posted for critiques. Almost everybody preffered in white...

henry_brazil
henry_brazil on Apr 16 '07
http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=3zjhkw0
henry_brazil
henry_brazil on Apr 16 '07
Geezus! Sorry about the doubles... I just canīt do it. :(
thedisco
thedisco on Apr 16 '07
I actually thought it was a prefume bottle as well.
It's a fantastic idea for sure, but a few kinks.

Maybe you should try more vivid colors.. to bring out the happiness of the idea.
FelisaFresh
FelisaFresh on Apr 16 '07
I love you just the way you are.


[ps the shirt... and you too.]

:o)
henry_brazil
henry_brazil on Apr 16 '07
Whoa!
Sorry sweetheart... Iīm married.
:)
ivywillow
ivywillow on Apr 16 '07
I agree w/ the folks who said to change the tag to just the peace symbol, & also to changing the pot leaves to flowers. Very nice design overall. I like the rose/lavender, light blue & bolder green color choices best.
pigleepoo
pigleepoo on Apr 17 '07
hm. i wanna say something helpful, cause i think this can go somewhere.... i just can't put my finger on why it doesn't make me want it.
cait payne
cait payne on Apr 17 '07
i like the tag, but not the sig logo
henry_brazil
henry_brazil on Apr 17 '07
The sig is not supose to be there... It was my mistake. (embarassed)
saisis tous les jour
saisis tous les jour on Apr 17 '07
add some dimension to the things inside the grenade with other colors.. please keep the tag! change it up a bit though, take out the piece sign inside the tag and "the peace grenade." keeping the instructions of how to use it and all the little peace-y type things inside get it across for me.
Mirakai
Mirakai on Apr 17 '07
I think the tag is cute, but the instructions clutter it a bit. I think it could be even better if you just left the label and warning. Great idea!
LeRoi
LeRoi on Apr 17 '07
Bad placement.
skrulltwelve
skrulltwelve on Apr 17 '07
nice tee!
i like afrika
i like afrika on Apr 17 '07
me encanta mucho. no cambia nada.

i will buy
aurorah
aurorah on Apr 17 '07
nice design, very conforting :)
henry_brazil
henry_brazil on Apr 17 '07
Thanks for all the votes, guys! :)
skrulltwelve
skrulltwelve on Apr 18 '07
this should win!
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Nodz
Nodz on Jun 11 '08
I love it. and i don't know how many people are color blind, but its obviously not red, totally pinkish/fushia/magenta color. it doesn't remind me of blood at all, but if it did that would be ok too! cause you can't have peace w/out a little bit of blood. (I wish you could, but it just doesn't ever seem to happen that way) Anywhoo... nice shirt, I do like the white, but other colors are great too!
carleyy
carleyy on Jun 11 '08
love it!
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