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 My first work with text, its commentary is very important.
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I think the text is a little difficult to read and worry about readability on the shirt especially. I would suggest moving the speaker up so that it is not covering the text and making the text itself bigger.
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i think i like it (:
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nice!
I confused "FORM" to "PORN" .... leave it.... (evil laugh) |
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i love the text
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i like it in the blue.
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form looks like porn fix it and you got yourself a winner
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$5 the way it is please.
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The little monsters rule!!! The greens all work really well. Don't like the text personally though. Yay for the monsters!
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In the image the text was a little next therefore the archive blew up, but I made a test in the original size and is well legible .
Thankyou for your comments |
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I don't think you need the UFO, creatures are good, though.
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i was reading it as porn too but i like porn so no foul there, nice characters
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Creatures look great
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Love the character designs, but the text is utter gibberish. Discuss what you are trying to express with an English speaker first. I'd love to see this improved.
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the monsters are cool!
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Change the font. $4.
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Bisparulz on Apr 12 '07 great monsters 5$
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aw cute. form does look like porn though lol. $4
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I read form right, but love looks like cove. Hehe. I like the design, though.
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I agree with pixtoons, it doesn't really make that much sense...
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nice characters hate all the text
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yeah, i deff. see the word
porn instead of form as well. the little monsters are adorable; love them. |
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I think a short with just the monsters would rock!!
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I don't think that this sentence makes sense: The rock is the mixture of desires moved for the creativity and the love THE contained in form of free music and pure poetical freedom.
Should the "THE" that I capitalized become some other word, like "that is" or something else, I don't know. I get it, and I get the end, but the middle seems to muddle. |
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One of the best text-containing designs I've seen. Rock on.
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I ordered an old archive without the update therefore was meaningless |
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omgawd. i need it. bad.
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like the monsters, don't like the text.
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