i brought my lunchbox.

by twodrunkenminers

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one of the kids i work with was talking about how much better it would be to ride a dragon than be at school. i fully agree. any and all constructive criticism appreciated.

Bisparulz on Apr 10 '07

great style 5$

katiegraphic on Apr 10 '07

Haha, I LOVE that it's doodle-y -- awesome.

RedUnderTheBed on Apr 10 '07

Awesome, not sure about the shirt color though..

ChristyJade on Apr 10 '07

i like it :) but the kids could be cuter...i dont like his face...the dragon is awesome tho!

amaliaslash on Apr 10 '07

it is a neat illustration, but i agree to rethink the shirt color. have it work with the colors you've chosen, or drop the white fill on the drawing?

asfi235 on Apr 10 '07

I f'ing *HATE* dragon tees. Trite, lame, suitable only for couch-potato fanboys (and fangirls). Aaargh.

But this one is a winner. I could actually wear this one. $5.

spiritual_slave on Apr 10 '07

If a dragon was looking at me like that whilst sitting on his back then i wouldnt still be sitting there! i think the dragon looks a tad too angry, or perhaps a tad too close to the kid...either lessen the anger or make a touch more space between the dragons face and the kids stomach...that way it doesnt look like the dragon is about to devour the kids innards...

MooCowMoo on Apr 10 '07

So cute :) 5

AeonGoddess on Apr 11 '07

Cute. I agree with the shirt color comments, but depending on the new color you might be able to keep the white fill. It's a good looking illustration, and would be a great kids tee.

zoro the 3 on Apr 11 '07

look like a skecth, i like it

aslyfox on Apr 12 '07

I don't like the positioning of the image. I'd prefer it centered. Also, I feel the dragon could be a little larger to be more imposing. Otherwise, excellent submission. :)

korben_da_last on Apr 12 '07

I love the "Larcenet" style (I suppose...) ! 5

miss_understood on Apr 12 '07

shirt color should be changed, and the dragon looks a tad too mean (like a few comments above said). $5 dollars though, because i'd still wear it :)

artbrains on Apr 13 '07

I like how the dragon is outlined green and not outlined black like the boy,...makes it look like an imaginary dragon...maybe this is intentional...?

druff on Apr 13 '07

frenchfried on Apr 13 '07

Narf. I love the concept.

twodrunkenminers on Apr 14 '07

thanks for all the advice - 's funny, i didn't read the dragon as mean or menacing at all, but i totally see it now that everyone's pointed it out. and i'm apparently horrible at picking out shirt colors. does anyone have any advice?

and who is "Larcenet"?

hxcassandra on Apr 14 '07

looking at the kid, i feel really bad

i want to cry

he looks so upset

like the dragon is going to steal his lunch

BlueandYellow on Apr 14 '07

i think it would be better if the kid was smaller

BobbyAnderson on Apr 14 '07

This is really heavy on the bottom right.

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