Threadless T-Shirts - Don't fall asleep

Don't fall asleep by kingforaday

Scoring finished:

548 days ago

Submitted on:

Apr 05 '07

Scored by:

2,264 people

Comments:

23 comments

Final average score:

2.22 out of 5

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kingforaday on Apr 05 '07

fresh from the critiques

iloveryan on Apr 05 '07

i like it. but the ghost on the window bothers me baby!!! it bothers mee!!

i love you.

lovetheworld on Apr 05 '07

eep!

m-unit_xo on Apr 06 '07

great use of negative space

MR_DAVE on Apr 06 '07

lol get over zombies and ghosts plzzzzzzzzzz

kingforaday on Apr 06 '07

dave: i subed that before you told me to stop, i swear its may last one for a while

Scotticus on Apr 06 '07

nice, i love gray scale tees, cool idea too

chembro303 on Apr 06 '07

rockin shirt...cool idea and style..except the black on black with outline over the window looks janky. I say $5 if that is fixed.

mephitine on Apr 06 '07

Mighty delicious. I like it.

kingforaday on Apr 06 '07

i think im gonna change up the ghosts, make it a bit wider

icebar on Apr 06 '07

i'm giving you a 5 because this is well thought-out.

loserizzy07 on Apr 07 '07

I love the design!

cupajoe24 on Apr 07 '07

Hee, interesting

Soft Revolution on Apr 07 '07

i really like this

chocolateaddict522 on Apr 07 '07

Neat idea--the only thing I would criticize is that the ghost on the bottom appears to be looking away, instead of at the guy in the bed. It throws it off a little for me. Other than that, it's great. :)

jenniep89 on Apr 08 '07

this is cool

Brentfitz90 on Apr 08 '07

Great design, I'd def. buy it

ezsix on Apr 08 '07

I like it...makes me think about being a kid...it was rough...lol

Pink Lace on Apr 09 '07

I think its amazing.
:D
I want it!!!!

SweetCera on Apr 09 '07

i love this! i want this too!!

kingforaday on Apr 09 '07

im gonna redo this then resubmit it

kingforaday on Apr 09 '07

thanks for the positive comments!

Pimply Cack on Apr 10 '07

This looks like the commercial on TV about quitting smoking..they show black monsters (in a persons brain) that scream when you need a cigarette.

TheloniusMnk on Apr 10 '07

It looks like Mr. Dude has no feet. Is he an amputee by any chance? I'd like to see better shading for the bed also. Neat design, though. I like.

Wonderkitten on Apr 10 '07

I'm loving it! good style.

JenniferMc on Apr 10 '07

this looks like a rip off of BillyBlob Cartoons. Total rip.

go to BillyBlob.com to see what i mean.

i just cant get over it. ITS SUCH A HARD RIPOFF.

JenniferMc on Apr 10 '07

Karma Ghost Cartoon. Yup.