My First Ride
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1882 days ago
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Apr 02 '07
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i L-O-V-E this.
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Momentarily confused: thought the bike was coming out of her/his (?) bum!! Nice style tho:-) |
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I miss my big wheel. I could go anywhere on it. (imaginary anywhere)
nice drawing. |
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Thanks all!
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that reminds me of myself. haha. i love it.
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Edword on Apr 03 '07 love the kids shirt WORD!
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Pegged pants rule!
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This is awesome, but I'd probably like it better without the kid.
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Thanks for commenting! The more the better. They should make giant sized big wheels for adults.
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dude i LOVE this! i want it! if this doesnt win, you should reprint it but the kid's shirt should say "werd" instead of "word." idk why. [and lmao, youre right about how they should make adult big wheels. they could be called "bigger wheels" :D ]
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mezo on Apr 05 '07 DID YOU MAKE THIS WHILE ON THE CLOCK? I AM TELLING THE BOSS ON YOU! AND HE WILL NOT CARE! SO NEVERMIND!
Good work! I wish the kids hair was less like a spaghetti helmet. A good way to fix it is to have it a solid yellow fill. Then it'd be mirroring the solid yellow fill of the Big Wheel frame. Also, the text looks like a caterpillar about to be squashed. The wheel of the Big Wheel is my favorite part. |
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it doesn't need the text under the shoe, the idea comes across without it. that said, i like this a lot.
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slup slap a big wheel up there... i dont want that brat on my shirt.
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Cool artwork, although there is nowhere to rest your eyes on the shirt. It may benefit from some white, but I don't know where it would be put.
The text is good, I like text on a shirt, i like text period. Placement wise, it does look like it's getting stepped on though. Mezo's idead about the fill on the hair could be the answer to my first sentence. |
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I remember seeing somewhere that an adult-sized Green Machine or Big Wheel was made, but it's been a couple of years...can't recall which one or where to find it. Googled it, but the link I found hit on a kid-sized version. I loved my Big Wheel, rode it up and down my street all the time. But that was in the 70's, not the 80's...and I DO remember the bandanas tied around the legs in the 80's. Good one!
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sweet
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Love it! The second I saw it I had a Punky Brewster squee moment.
I agree with comments above: the hair should be less scratchy, maybe filled in to match the bike. And the bike placement could be shifted a little. Keep up the great work. |
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it's very cool and i like the feel of it
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i want to be that girl.
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Ha! Yeah, I think John (aka the "boss") was actually in here while I was working on this. I did a version with a yellow fill and couldn't get it looking right, but I should have played around more because I agree about the spaghetti hair.
I wanted to keep the text but make it less intrusive so I that's why I chose that placement. Oh, I do have to say, the big wheel was for sure the 80's, it may have been the 70's too, but as an 80's baby, I know every kid on the block in my region had one! Thanks for all the great comments everyone! |
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i love this and would buy it in a second!!!
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I REALY LIKED YOUR STILE ! KEEP GOING BABE !
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Thanks Kubi! I've got a sub pending and some other stuff I'm working on. Run by the crit boards and check out BORN TO ROCK!
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the design seems empty and needs more work..o wait it's already been scored.
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