Threadless T-Shirts - not quite asleep

not quite asleep by Iheartgus

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i like the sheep...

ninja.bassist on Apr 02 '07

What does the center sheep on the white say? Relahorshe?

Iheartgus on Apr 02 '07

nah, it says "relationship"

amoania on Apr 02 '07

i think the words should make more sense, or at least be related or something...
to me, they don't see to "go" together...

amoania on Apr 02 '07

*seem

Natika on Apr 02 '07

"School, Mistakes, work" -that's so my mind when I'm trying to get to sleep!
I might wear this as a night shirt. :) Maybe it would help me sleep. lol
cute sheep.

lesquelette on Apr 02 '07

same as above. nice

esKIMoAK on Apr 02 '07

the sheep scare me.

Yabi Kuro on Apr 02 '07

DEFINITELY on denim! I'm an insomniac and I've tried the sheep thing, and the aforementioned topics still sprung to mind. $5

LauraJerry on Apr 02 '07

I think I'd like it better if the words went - Work, Play, Sleep, School, Mistakes, Relationships. It'd be a more logical order. Cool idea though.

stardance on Apr 02 '07

I like the idea, but I wish it had been done differently.

ooOkevtOoo on Apr 02 '07

what about the ever popular "laundry, debt, hangover"?

pluralnecklace on Apr 02 '07

i dont like how they are all the exact same sheep cut and pasted with different words on them, make the sheep different too

cdkscully on Apr 02 '07

I would have to agree with the above. Great idea for a nightshirt!

ice_pepper on Apr 03 '07

i wish the main part of the sheep wasn't ctrl+v'd

fouchnickens on Apr 03 '07

I like the idea, but putting the sheep in a straight row seem to give the illustration no energy -- shouldn't the sheep be jumping over a fence? Also I think the placement may be too low. I'd move them up about 3 inches, and make a couple jump a fence.

orwell on Apr 03 '07

brilliant idea.

dragoness on Apr 04 '07

love the idea but the sheep are kinda funky looking.

JCD2712 on Apr 04 '07

i really like this....i would want some other words and more sheep, maybe wrapping around to the back. i also like the idea of jumping a fence, b/c that is typcially how it's done in cartoons and stuff.

a single sunbeam on Apr 04 '07

This reminds me of Le Petit Prince.

"Dessine-moi un mouton!"

helloyellow on Apr 04 '07

Hmm... the sheep are very cute! Definately make them jump.

helloyellow on Apr 04 '07

Oh hey - you're right Sunbeam! That's exactly what I was "hmm"ing about! They reminded me of something adorable, and now I remember. Thanks!

jacquiwithacue on Apr 04 '07

the sheep faces are creepy/unpleasant. it would be better if they were happier and more dreamlike. agreed about one jumping a fence. and if the words made more sense together it would pull the concept together a lot more.

emilydelbecchi on Apr 05 '07

i think its wonderful

Linkoftime on Apr 06 '07

I like it. The sheep aren't putting you to sleep, they are keeping you up. They are all the distractions.

Very cool idea.

joolya on Apr 06 '07

It's a funny concept, but the design doesn't work for me.

The torture of the sheep is a good idea, or The Violence of the Lambs

deaddovedonoteat on Apr 07 '07

I like the design.
The point of counting sheep is it's monotonous and repetitive, so switching up the sheep design too much from sheep to sheep would eliminate that purpose and make it more confusing IMO.
Try to make it a bit darker on denim, and maybe make it interesting by having some sheep jumping a fence and others walking, like one up, then one down, etc.
$4

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pamelf on Apr 09 '07

great design, but the words don't really make sense the way they are placed...

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