This is my second submission and one that is still [more or less] being worked on. Please be kind. Honest C&C is always appreciated. Always returned.

i want the box to be more hand drawn messy...
nice design though

to be honest, what is the point of submitting something that you yourself still feel you are working on? how can we rate it if we know its not totally finished? i realise people go back and work on things after they've had suggestions on threadless, but i'd like it if that at least thought felt it was finished when they submitted.

i like the idea very much. its a bit big though.

i had a thick moment there - the sentence should read:
but i'd like it if they at least felt it was finished when they submitted.

i agree with making the spring and box more "sketchy." maybe you can place the box up higher, as if it were actually near where the heart would be on a person's body. neato, heart beato. a 4.

You've got a good idea here, keep at it because the design is nice.

And I would agree with the others when I say, go for a slightly "messier" design for the box. Don't keep the lines so neatly attached to each other. Colors and everything are quite slick however. Good work!

Thanks for all the great feedback! When I wrote ---still being worked on--- it was kind of miss leading. Funny - I cleaned up all the lines on the advice of a one of my graphic design teachers. She said it was just too messy and cleaner was better. This is a little lesson in following my own instincts. Triple thankies

It looks good on the gray and the blue. The only thing i'd recommend is possibly making it a little smaller and making the box more defined: shadows, textures, messy lines, whatever.