All Cranked Up
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3154 days ago
Submitted on:
Oct 08 '03
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Average score:
1.36 from 292 votes
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i want the box to be more hand drawn messy...
nice design though |
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to be honest, what is the point of submitting something that you yourself still feel you are working on? how can we rate it if we know its not totally finished? i realise people go back and work on things after they've had suggestions on threadless, but i'd like it if that at least thought felt it was finished when they submitted.
i like the idea very much. its a bit big though. |
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i had a thick moment there - the sentence should read:
but i'd like it if they at least felt it was finished when they submitted. |
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i agree with making the spring and box more "sketchy." maybe you can place the box up higher, as if it were actually near where the heart would be on a person's body. neato, heart beato. a 4.
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You've got a good idea here, keep at it because the design is nice.
And I would agree with the others when I say, go for a slightly "messier" design for the box. Don't keep the lines so neatly attached to each other. Colors and everything are quite slick however. Good work! |
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Thanks for all the great feedback! When I wrote ---still being worked on--- it was kind of miss leading. Funny - I cleaned up all the lines on the advice of a one of my graphic design teachers. She said it was just too messy and cleaner was better. This is a little lesson in following my own instincts. Triple thankies
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3 days later
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It looks good on the gray and the blue. The only thing i'd recommend is possibly making it a little smaller and making the box more defined: shadows, textures, messy lines, whatever.
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