"Age and the places I have been do not follow lines of time, the past is more changeable than we are taught, the future more certain than I remember..."

no one's gonna like how tiny the print is, ill tell you that right now.

The tree's top looks a bit dwarfed.

it's beautiful and profound!

similar to poet-trees..

did you write that phrase on your own?

yes yes yes. i wrote it. i was nervous to submit it... but i'm trying to be strong. thanks for the comments.

I really like it, there is something plain, but yet really awesome about it.



Not so hot on the tan-like colors, but that might just be me xD

It's a great start. I hope you work in the design some and resubmit.

I like it, something I would buy if the branches were tweaked.

I really like it. I would buy it just like that.

thank you so much... i was a little disappointed with the coconut sub being dropped cause that was my favorite, but it's nice to hear people like this.

Definitely like the quote and the concept.. But I agree with the others about the tree needing to be tweaked/reworked a bit.

please not on white or cream!



it's so pretty, but please not on white or cream!

I like the quote. Please fix the execution.

I like it, but it needs something, dunno what.

i really love the quote....

Not so keen on the design but it's a nice piece of writing.

like the quote and like the idea...maybe if you tried using the quote as the outline for the tree? that would look cool

thanks for all the suggestions. i'm actually really glad I submitted it now because of the feedback.

i like it, the quote and the tree! very artistic

Me likie.... but I have to agree with fixing the tree a bit..... I love the shirt though!!!!!

like the quote, like the idea...

tree needs work, really dislike the font.

i adore the words - and the concept is really awesome - i think it'd be cooler if you had like the words making up the tree or the leaves maybe. but some would say i'm cliche:) wonderful idea:)

like the quote a lot

like the tree idea but it needs a little something

I actually really like the simplicity of everything. The trees, where the writing is, the leaf. Nice.

Like the idea, bigger print, as said above. Otherwise, beautiful.

Like many have said, I really like the idea, but the design is wanting. With a good deal of tweaking, I think it could be a great shirt. I think the yellow leaf at the bottom is a cool touch, adds interest.

In a world full of bold visual bombardment and attention demanding design, the subtle can often speak stand out the most.

I think this design could benefit from a thickening of the tree outline in just a few key places to establish it a bit more.

Great combination of writing and artwork.

It takes the whole concept of designing a shirt to a different level.

I like the leaf, and I think the cream colored tee looks a lot better than the design on white.

The larger text wouldn't make a difference, no passer by would be able to read it either way, and anyone who would stop and walk up to it and begin reading, wouldn't need the text to be bigger. (unless they had bad eyesight and read large print books etc.)