the small text is not readable..is it supposed to look like that? i love the rest though..the color and all..

Actually Flash chops up imported text blocks if they are outliined and changes the line spacing if they are not outlined. Catch 22. But It was necessary to allow people the option to zoom. I can't stand it when I cant zoom in on submissions. Anyway, in the native file the text isn't all chopped up. Thanks for the comment.

I say no to the text.

getting down pretty proper . . .

pulling things apart and puttin' back together . . .

awesome stuff, a perfect 5 from moi :D

I find the typography ok because it relates to the iamge very nicely, but I don't think theres any need for the micro type. Unless there's some super important thing going on there but usually less busy and more simple is the key. Cool illustration too. I dig, just maybe a little more work/variation/simpleness hehe simpleness.

fresh

I like it, text and all. Cool idea, nice execution.

i think the small type adds an important element. nice work.

I like it. Its different.

I like it with the text, especially chopped up, because then to me it just becomes and element, not really text meant to be read. Cool overall I think. rock on

The um.......arrows are a bit dodgy, but it still rocks (with the text!)

i love it

there is something about the colours and text i don't like.. hmmm.. maybe it's just me
like the bunny thing thou!

delete the body copy and you're there.

it is like re-design...nice one...give you 5...