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cheaper by luness

Scoring finished:

531 days ago

Submitted on:

Mar 20 '07

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2,178 people

Comments:

30 comments

Final average score:

1.92 out of 5

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by luness

Hello, everybody!
This is my first post ever, and also my first design done entirely in Flash. It took me forever, until today afternoon, but it was fun to do.
Comments and suggestions will be always welcomed, since I want to get better on this. I love t-shirts.
The design? I got the idea after looking at several pics of the Space Shuttle and all that burning expensive fuel used for the launching. Enjoy.

Don Marinno on Mar 20 '07

:O 4!

cedars on Mar 20 '07

i really like this! however i feel like you don't necessarily need the squares and the separation the rocket and the sky. i love the way the cloud and the stars go over the border though.

you're off to a great start! 4

archergirl on Mar 20 '07

neat how the clouds and stars break out of the picture plane - and fanciful - but the colors aren't quite right - or maybe what i mean by that is that I couldn't wear them with my skin tone -
very cool shirt

chelsea4 on Mar 20 '07

colors other than orange would be good

SuperAggroMike on Mar 20 '07

This design is pretty much crappy

Mandyhello on Mar 20 '07

I like it :) Maybe without the orange border though?

korbana_anna on Mar 20 '07

I'd like it better without the b lack and orange. Just make it simple and blue with the whole airplane and clouds and it would be much nicer ;)

winkinthecity on Mar 20 '07

I don't think you need any of the squares or background - I'd love it with just the shuttle and balloons in the center.

great idea! very funny.

jimshin on Mar 21 '07

i like the design!

pinball22 on Mar 21 '07

Unlike other people, the squares and backgrounds are my favorite part! I think they're what make it stand out.

PiNKlePuNKin on Mar 21 '07

This is great for your very first. I think the concept is very amusing. The art is okay, rather bland. I really don't like the colours at all. In fact these are all of the least appealing colours (in my book) thrown together for a colour nightmare (red, black, yellow).

Slinkey Binky on Mar 21 '07

i thnk that's clever. 5

luness on Mar 21 '07

Thanks a lot for the comments, suggestions and honest words! thank you even for the "pretty much crappy" one!...not too constructive but definitely worth to consider.

This is very different to what I'm doing right now (check my last portfolio and you'll see what I'm talking about) but it's also quite fun to do, and very challenging, so I will take notes from you and do my best next time.

Babo on Mar 22 '07

I agree with pinball, the squares make the shirt! The night sky is my favourite part

catdogpigduck on Mar 22 '07

scientifically speaking this shirt has issues, don't get me started!

ant32394 on Mar 23 '07

what the fa? how in the world can less than 10 ballons lift like 15 tons, good design but un-realistic

Mama Young on Mar 23 '07

i like it....the squares , the unscientifficness of it all...

mephitine on Mar 24 '07

Great design..the overlap of the outer space sky and the earth sky, the stars spilling out of the border...good work, nice ideas here. And who cares if the balloons are unrealistic? I think most people will see it as incongruous, that's part of the fun.

Walnuts on Mar 24 '07

I don't think 'realism' is common or necessary in any designs on threadless. You get the idea with the balloons as they are.

And as for the guy who made the 'crappy' comment, I hope you've got designs posted cuz i'm coming there next!

I like it.

TheMacFactor on Mar 24 '07

did you SEE the size of those balloons? it doesn't matter how many, it's the size that counts! ...haha

ALAYNA people 4 peace on Mar 24 '07

i think it would be best with just the spaceship and the balloons and nothing else

NickyThePoet on Mar 24 '07

Different color shirt, a nice dark blue perhaps?

cidnee on Mar 24 '07

i think i'd prefer it just the ship and the baloons
cool idea that way

OldCircleEyes on Mar 25 '07

i don't like the orange

rombonaut on Mar 25 '07

I dont like it.
but the idea of an airplane+baloons is very good.
loose everything but a+b and put it on a blue (sky) tee.
that would be great.
I want score you this time.

mayreeuhm on Mar 25 '07

$5 i love this !! no orange though

Joshuhwah on Mar 26 '07

design wise it's great! It would look better on a colour other than orange, and I think it would look even better without the boxes!

claireiscool on Mar 26 '07

definitely not orange please, other than that chin chin

katnipp28 on Mar 26 '07

you could lose the borders and not have it be an orange shirt, or keep the borders and change the shirt color to match it. other than that I think I like it...

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