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I'm not wild about the cream colored shirt, and the design is a little too big on the shirt, but I really like it.
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I kind of wanted teh text and teh illustration to be on equal footing on this thats why I madeit as big as I did but if enough people say too big then Ill know that it was too big
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cant decide if its too big or not unless we see another version with the text smaller. But Right now I think it looks good. Drawing and text are well done.
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I don't much like the colour of the t-shirt perhaps a maroon? I do like the design and the text though!
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Lose the rosewood font and make the characters bigger on the shirt. Part of the fun of owning a Threadless shirt is telling people what its titled.
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the characters on this make me so happy, but the text doesn't float it for me. i love the balance you have going w/ the western themes and the childlike elements.
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Haha, nice one! I like your treatment of the text, but it might be better either much bigger or smaller than your characters... just to create some contrast. Once again, loving the style!!
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great stuff, nice colors and distress.
would be nice of the characters were more incorporated with the text...the guy could be sitting on it and the rabbit nibblin on it... |
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thanks luke... I am actually going to try and do a kids book bsed of this theme so I may use that idea for teh cover
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i don't mind text in subs. so with that said i really like this! i've always loved your style as well. nice job!
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haha. i like the concept and style, but not so much the layout. maybe if the text was just slightly smaller and below the gun instead of above? i don't know, i'd have to see it.
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Love your characters as usual, make that little cactus dude bigger and drop the size of that font a lot more.... I hate to say it but.."LOSE THE TEXT', ha, it's all about your characters man.
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the text is ace! i want it! not too sure about the image though.maybe if the writing was smaller? i dunno.
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where does the bunny finish?? It kind of looks like it just morphs into the guy's leg!! - looks unfinished!! but good overall concept :)
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color choice is nice, but i agree that the text is overwhelming and probably not even necessary- name your shirt that, we'll get it.
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About my design
larger view to be found here
http://www.flickr.com/photos/90242758@N00/421747138/