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Satement good. Execution bad. Work with it, push it a bit further. Remember there is a back to the shirt so maybe you can utilize it or at least work with the left edge. Those spaces are looking kinda awkward. Check out some other type faces too. Wonderful concept though.
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concept hue has hit the nail on the head.
maybe a really grunge typeface and army colours to really take the piss out of all fashion victims. sorry warb thats all I had to offer. I dig this shirt. |
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Yeah, might as well go for the full irony value.
Throw in some scribbles and arrows and drips, or put the text in the very corner. |