Getting Into It
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Mar 12 '07
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2.00 from 2,375 votes
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amazing detail.
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The walls of the tunnel look good, but the childishness of the worms spoil it for me. The juxtaposition doesn't really work.
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Do like the little one with the ? though1
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olie! on Mar 12 '07 To be honest, I think this would kick ass if you got rid of the worms and the radioactive can altogether and left it as just the tunnel.
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exactly!!...lol the worms ruin it for me to but that tunnel is saWEET!
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buy it!...$
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i also think it would be good withou the worms.. the tunnel is AMAZING
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detail please
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was the tunnel a photo one of you took? or did you guys draw that?
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More realistic worms please. Otherwise, I love it.
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Okay Okay, I get it... !!! hahaha.
HEY EVERYONE!!! Before you vote.. please look at this revision: click here or copy paste address (new window) http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d86/IcyDeadPeople/jl-ray3.gif I removed the worm faces and I think it solves the problem. ___ thanks. ekaj: you'll have to ask .jl-london about the tunnel, that was his baby, but he told me he drew it. |
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i like the worms how they were!
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well, maybe people could please say which one they like, if either one works for them =) thanks for your comments either way.
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Flying Mouse on Mar 12 '07 I saw the revision. I like how the way you make the background, but the worm still need to put some detail I think, maybe some solid dark shadow like what you did on the background. Then this design could be a winner.
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Add some eyes to the worms in the revision. Otherwise, this is pretty good.
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I was distracted by my dislike for the worms and almost missed how incredible the background is. The revision is better, but still flattens an otherwise fantastic design. I'm skipping without scoring in hopes of something better n thefuture!
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I'm with the rest here... Keep same detail on the worms... Or ask .jl-london or whoever draw it. Now it's just strange...
The revision was better though... but still not anough. |
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i like the revision better, but now it looks like tentacles instead of worms. love the tunnel though.
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the background looks awesome! really nice detail, i like this
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jpiatt on Mar 12 '07 the tunnel is amazing. The worms and the radioactive barrel aren't doing it for me though. I'd use the tunnel in another sub later. Just come up with a better concept. This isn't doing it for me
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Just the tunnel.
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kaloyster on Mar 12 '07 Haha that wall tunnel was definitely inspired by d3d's 12clubber design.
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i like thoes worms , they are disgusting and cute...
and they make this design lively. but i think the tunnel is too graphic ~ anyway, keep going*__________* |
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noooo save the worms theyre cute they make the shirt look less sinister
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looks really sweet... i like it and the contrasting styles... but not 100% sure if id wear it.. so 5
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I'd buy as is. I'm fine with the contrasting styles with the knowledge that it was a collaboration, with the exception that I personally would have liked to see more of a 3d look to the snake/worms for light consistency...I think it's great regardless.
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r.o.b.o.t.i.c.octopus on Mar 13 '07 the faces are fine j-ray.
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nice revision - and the worm with the
question mark over its head is a nice touch in both designs |
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this one is really nice. i like the worm and the setting.
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I like this J. To all those that want to get rid of the worms; what would an empty tunnel have to do with bioshock as a theme? Good work fellas.
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cha-ching!
excellent illus! |
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i like the worms.... i think its sweet.
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Awww, everyone's picking on those cutesy little worms. They do kind of distract from how awesome the art is on everything else though. but if it was just a tunnel, I think it'd be a sucky, meaningless t-shirt.
And the Bioshock theme would be totally lost. I'm gonna skip because I want to give it both high and low marks! |
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i like the worms either way, i think this is great!
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very ill 5
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Simple eyes on the worms; not too cartoony, not sinister. Change the color of the little worm on the ground. That way, he's obviously not the same kind of worm as those coming out of the barrel. Might I suggest a grate at the end of the tunnel.
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nice one, j-ray!
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wicked
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I'm a fan of silly sludgy worms! Good on ya!
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$5
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seems like you ran out of inspiration when it came to the worms.
the tunnel is super sweet. the barrell thing is really cool too....then there's the worms. |
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nice one man, you know i've been away for a few days but i reckon this turned out great, love the worms and prefer the faces in version 1. safe! $5 Agreed, my setting is nothing without the worms
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Haha, that little guy is adorable. Looks perfect on the tee! 5 and $
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Nice, but I liked the worms the way they were.
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glue sniffers.
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hehe, i like the worms, they're cute. and the tunnel is awesome.
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I want it! But only if the worms can keep their faces
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One of the best collaborations i've seen on here, you've both brought something very different to the design and it looks great. Well done lads, $5
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With the smiles this just might win!!
So much texture, i just love it! 5 |
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I wish it was some sort of other concept that included the background. The worms are just... out of place. Its weird.
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grayehound on Mar 13 '07 the tunnel is nice, the colors used there really give the sense of light. the worms are okay, tho they neither are cute enough to really like nor interesting enough to stand on their own. the two together look like something taken from a kiddie stickerbook pasted on a photo. that tunnel with a better idea would be a good design
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I love this Jray!
it would be much nicer if this would be printed with glow in the dark ink! $5 |
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the tunnel and bin look amazing! not sure about the worms tho... Its cute but it kinda kills the amazingness of the tunnel lol :\ its a 4 from me
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haha, best of the comp, $5
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this is awesome guys, love the tunnel but the creatures are great
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ur style always comes out : )
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i agree with olie!. I think it would look better without the worms. then i would give it a five.
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I dig this. Reminds me of old, ega adventure games. Hugo's House of Horror ftw!
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this is a textbook example of a collaboration gone wrong
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The tunnel is freaksihly awesome however the warm do sort of detract a great deal.
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i like the worms
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Amazing effect.. very cool.
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valorandvellum on Mar 14 '07 The idea behind it is really cool... but the clash of the styles is something that could probably be worked on. It might look better if the worms had some of the same texture treatment for shading, and if their facial features were drawn in a more realistic looking form. Either the background needs to be more simple or the worms need to be more detailed (the latter would probably be more preferable). What you have is almost there... if you work it just a little bit more, you could have a print on your hands!
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Gee, so many suggestions... too bad nobody said a thing while this was in the critique section, huh?
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get out! this was in the crits? i missed it
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yup for about 12 hours! lots of people voted... nobody said anything.
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it's a spooky tunnel but those toxic worms are just so gosh darn friendly
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I wouldn't want this shirt if it was just the spooky tunnel.... I dunno why people want to get rid of the worms. Then it'd look good but it'd be super boring. The worms are happy to have found the toxic waste because they were tranformed into giant, sentient creatures, unlike the little worms they were before, all confused and stuff.
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And the placement of the patterns is supposed to provide shading, which makes sense with the light...ummmmm yeah.
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HAWT!
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priscilla never likes my shirts :( except for one time, and it got dropped early
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nice to see you here J
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I should know better but i've been drinking....
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way too much I hope
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work on the worms in a simila style to the tunnel then resub, otha than that this looks great. i guess you just need to merge the two styles a little more even though the concept is there
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Make a bunch of different shirts to please all the camps.
The sad emo people can have their plain old tunnel, the gothickish folks can have their scary worms. and the kids at heart (like me) can have our exciting acid-tripping worms. ;) |
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valorandvellum on Mar 15 '07 Don't get rid of the worms! That's the whole point of the design. I think if you just stole some of the texture from the tunnel and placed it on the worms, it would help unify the overall look.
Also, I never saw this in the critiques... but I've also been slacking from threadless a little bit. And don't say that I don't like your designs! I try to comment, but you put out so much I can't keep up! |
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I think if you just stole some of the texture from the tunnel and placed it on the worms, it would help unify the overall look.
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thanks for the suggestion, i'll give that a try, but it's probably too late to sway any voters!
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edjuvreason on Mar 15 '07
Make a bunch of different shirts to please all the camps. The sad emo people can have their plain old tunnel, the gothickish folks can have their scary worms. and the kids at heart (like me) can have our exciting acid-tripping worms. ;) By the way. if you look at my design folio, you'll see that's pretty much what I do =) |
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valorandvellum on Mar 15 '07 An excellent design sometimes isn't enough to sway voters. They've been scoring extra low lately.
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i really like it, but the worms arent cutting it for me.
i think if you stayed in the detailed illustration and not made the worms cartoony i would buy it 4 |
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5&$
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this shirt reminds me of Aquateen Hunger Force episode "The Drizzle" in which Shake exposes himself to toxic waste he found in the basement and ends up having a huge green worm thing grow out of his side. anyone?
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Yeh same.
anyway, i like it, i'd buy it, nice concept for the bioshock |
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robbed!
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such a mediocre score, like all of my scores
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think we deserved better man but hey, cheers for this lil' collab thing, gd times
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Those silly worms really got into it. Inspired by and for the Bioshock comp.