Ditto on the poo. I thought, "Is the kid 'lucky' because he's got him some unicorn poop? I've never heard of lucky unicorn poop." Hows about an apple or something instead? Really nice style otherwise. Like the Design.
I didn't think it was poo, I thought it was a ball of tinfoil. But I guess that's just me. I figure you were going for a lump of sugar or something. Change it to an apple and it'll be great.
rofl I know. It was SUPPOSED to be grain/unicorn food or whatever, but then I shrank it for submission and everyone thought it was poop. Will definitely change it to an apple or something.
LOVE!! Reminds me of a story i wrote in elementary school about a guy who lived in the forest of pooglie pie and he had a unicorn. Change the poo and i would buy it!
I'm a little confused though. If this does get selected, would they use the one I submitted or would they allow me to give them the fixed version? Or would I have to resubmit altogether?
viralVISUAL, you'd have to resubmit the new one. It would go through the voting process again and, without the poo factor, I imagine it would do pretty well :)
My first thought was that the friend was jealous of the poo/food, not of the unicorn. What if you just got rid of the food and had the boy petting the unicorn instead? Simpler message to get across, I think.
Keep up the good work!
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viralVISUAL
Don't you hate it when your friends get unicorns and you DON'T?
EmilyR
It looks like he is being fed poo. cute though
Vorernil
Yeah! I had that same thought too! Maybe he should be holding up something else.
bektravels
Hehe, this is great... change the poo to somethin else and I'd buy one in to secs:-)
bektravels
*2
stardance
I thought it was poo, too. Unicorn poo.
The Jolly Brewer
I thought it was a play on unicorn poo being rare or something...
Yes, looks like poo, which is a shame cos it's a nice illustration
Low Digital
Ditto on the poo. I thought, "Is the kid 'lucky' because he's got him some unicorn poop? I've never heard of lucky unicorn poop." Hows about an apple or something instead? Really nice style otherwise. Like the Design.
piledrivefinger
"It looks like he is being fed poo" - LOL! I agree. Cute, still.
Silent-T
I didn't think it was poo, I thought it was a ball of tinfoil. But I guess that's just me. I figure you were going for a lump of sugar or something. Change it to an apple and it'll be great.
Bisparulz
nice style 5$
Sweetpotatoes
Unicorn poop is lucky? I had no idea.
viralVISUAL
rofl I know. It was SUPPOSED to be grain/unicorn food or whatever, but then I shrank it for submission and everyone thought it was poop. Will definitely change it to an apple or something.
rest for the weary
it does look like he's feeding him poop
Dane0
Try feeding a sugar cube or an apple (a carrot would be too similar to the horn)
Dane0
...then again if there was something on a sugar cube then the unicorn might not seem so far fetched...
bluegabs
luck! you have to pick up unicorn poo!
alancaster
When people started saying poop I immediately thought of changing it to a sugar cube as well.
jen52983
i had the same though EmilyR did... we're just disgusting though, aren't we?!!
nice style!
Trimm Trabb
That kid on the right looks like Shin Chan.
Funny design though.
Mo-lissa
Damn i hate it when all my friends pull up on their unicorns...I feel that guys pain...$5
steph-_-
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steph-_-
i agree with the designer...boy was i jealous that day
Adnamaeel
As soon as you make that apple/sugar cube/poo issue go away, I'll love it completely.
Adnamaeel
The dude on the right looks like one of the animated "bandmembers" of the Gorillaz.
pixel_dust
The green guy looks like my boyfriend...
thehistorian
LOVE!! Reminds me of a story i wrote in elementary school about a guy who lived in the forest of pooglie pie and he had a unicorn. Change the poo and i would buy it!
viralVISUAL
http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/8720/shirt2vg9.jpg
Here's the edited/larger version.
I'm a little confused though. If this does get selected, would they use the one I submitted or would they allow me to give them the fixed version? Or would I have to resubmit altogether?
viralVISUAL
And I really appreciate all the comments, thanks alot.
Willish
I think unicorns would eat something more awesome than an apple.
Like sugar cubes or cupcakes!
bektravels
Apples, sugar cubes or cupcakes, I don't really mind either way, just print, print PRINT!
TrumpetPlayer
Love the style of the characters! $4 : )
samtabsav
viralVISUAL, you'd have to resubmit the new one. It would go through the voting process again and, without the poo factor, I imagine it would do pretty well :)
Super Bunny Princess
Ha, I thought he was saying the unicorn was lucky cause he was getting fed...stuff.
anniekat
apple is good- i like :)
thejiggerypokery
I thought the kid with the unicorn was showing his mate a marshmallow, like a golden goose, but threadless style.
yinyang5
Its cool, but fix the food.
ImNoLo
i totally thought he had golden unicorn poo. ehh.. fix it and i'd buy.
mkeany
i like the apple change you did.
CheesecakeBree
It's much cuter sans the poo-looking grain. =)
Alexandra Marie
I love it with the apple.
lizzscarlett
TOTALLY make the unicorn eat a cupcake. great concept and execution!
iamregina
i thought he was showing his friend unicorn poop. O_O
the one nicodemus
i guess if a unicorn poos in your hand is worth two unicorn poo's in a bush?
kateybabey
Ditto about the apple - a handful of candy would work for me ^^
iambevin
$5 even with the poo! I knew what it was though.
Love your style
cintrao
good artwork . well done.
kurukuru78
Don't any of you remember unicorn poo is marshmellows?! Not a problem anymore...
gluetooth
My first thought was that the friend was jealous of the poo/food, not of the unicorn. What if you just got rid of the food and had the boy petting the unicorn instead? Simpler message to get across, I think.
Keep up the good work!
ari.patrick
I like it except for the food. It sorta looks like poop.
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