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Octobrella

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Mar 13 '07
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Valentin Falko

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by Valentin Falko
Hope you like it.



greetings.
thedreampilot
thedreampilot on Mar 13 '07
oh i like it very much.
castle
   castle on Mar 14 '07
The idea has merit. I think colors could be more engaging and the drawing of the guy needs some work. Is he wearing a tie? with a long sleeve t-shirt?



Is it raining?
Orange~On~Orange
   Orange~On~Orange on Mar 14 '07
nice drawing chap.
dnangel111
dnangel111 on Mar 14 '07
Words cannot describe how much I love this.



$5.



I ♥ octopusses.
Used-name
Used-name on Mar 14 '07
Love this. but I prefer center position.
criz
criz on Mar 14 '07
I like it! but can't the guy have a face, please?
zendog
zendog on Mar 14 '07
really clever
naamaG
naamaG on Mar 14 '07
really loved it, very nice
Alex M. Solefish
Alex M. Solefish on Mar 14 '07
that's a pretty incredible octopus.
Alex M. Solefish
Alex M. Solefish on Mar 14 '07
^I agree it would be nice to see a face on the guy.
Polyester Jones
Polyester Jones on Mar 14 '07
I don't think he needs a face. In fact I really like that he doesn't have a face.
itwasa_trick
itwasa_trick on Mar 14 '07
interesting idea. needs some reworking.
jen52983
jen52983 on Mar 14 '07
i never knew Octopus were such a huge craze until I came to Threadless.
quaycur
quaycur on Mar 14 '07
creepy
gwendar
gwendar on Mar 14 '07
I really like the concept, but I wish the design of the man matched the design of the octopus.
Arco
Arco on Mar 14 '07
I think castle has the right line of questioning: what exactly is this fellow's attire? It really does seem like a strange tie over long-sleeve shirt combo.



I think the octobrella is awesome, but the guy needs some work to unify the design. 3 for now, but with some revisions this is an easy five.
inspectorluv
inspectorluv on Mar 14 '07
I agree with Arco, gwendar, et. al. Almost there- love the octopus (and I'm not an octophile), but the guy doesn't quite fit.
bunuel
bunuel on Mar 14 '07
oooooh ! i love it



5$
ecolilady
ecolilady on Mar 14 '07
I like it, like the guy & love the octopus. 5$
ThreadPerrie
ThreadPerrie on Mar 15 '07
5$

Great decision to place it off-center!

It might be a great deal more effective if it were more subtle (consider shifting the non-background colors closer to the background, sort of a "dampening" effect), that was it's something you always go "[squint] what's that... thing again?... oh yeah haha" instead of something you quickly toss off
ThreadPerrie
ThreadPerrie on Mar 15 '07
er, that is, "something you grow to toss off quickly"
Mikey Maddox
Mikey Maddox on Mar 15 '07
Awesome. They guy doesn't need a face.



5
bobmi
bobmi on Mar 15 '07
The guy does NOT need a face. And I think it looks awesome. Not everything needs to be matchy, and I love the way you drew the Octopus. Great.
slr_ecoli
slr_ecoli on Mar 15 '07
Drawing great. Bigger on shirt.
mephitine
mephitine on Mar 15 '07
I like it, but I'd like it more if I could see the guy's expression. Is he ashamed of having an octopus for an umbrella? Is he proud? Is he blase? Is it just another day at the office? I'm curious.
caido89
caido89 on Mar 15 '07
yes yes yes!!! no face, it's fine the way it is 5$
Zabuza7
Zabuza7 on Mar 15 '07
needs to be a bit bigger. and probably centered.
Petanca
Petanca on Mar 15 '07
that is very cool
Icon7D
Icon7D on Mar 15 '07
awesome
gavacho13
gavacho13 on Mar 15 '07
Very Cool! Off the wall in a tastefully done way.
suregena
suregena on Mar 15 '07
I like this shirt but I don't like the positioning.
Velvet Jones
Velvet Jones on Mar 15 '07
Larger and more towards the middle and you've got my vote.

Please, don't make it bottom heavy.
Velvet Jones
Velvet Jones on Mar 15 '07
Great drawing, btw.
Chica_chica
Chica_chica on Mar 15 '07
why does it only have six arms? give it all eight and I'd buy it. 4 for now
BeckRokk
BeckRokk on Mar 16 '07
It looks like the same shape as the octopus from the WE WERE NOT MEANT TO BE shirt from Dinosaur Comics. Way too much, in fact. http://www.qwantz.com/cephalopodloversunite.jpg
Valentin Falko
Valentin Falko on Mar 16 '07
Are you serious? This is the first time I see this "we were not ment to be"-shirt and I see a wide difference.



I agree with Polyester Jones, Mikey Maddox, bobmi...

The guy doesn't need a face. "Not everything needs to be matchy" [thanks bobmi] thats my opinion too.



I am not sure with this position, maybe the center position is better... hmmm.



Thanks for the comments guys :)
nineteen.
nineteen. on Mar 16 '07
great concept, love the color choices. very understated. keep everything exactly the way it is.



5$.
Badrissell
Badrissell on Mar 17 '07
very cool. $5
fidolofido
fidolofido on Mar 17 '07
The man's hair looks a bit like Hitler. ;_;
arabiantealeaves
arabiantealeaves on Mar 17 '07
tenta-cool!



seriously though, more detail on the tentacles; no detail on the guy's face.



kiersten620
kiersten620 on Mar 18 '07
i love it, but shouldnt the octopus have 8 legs?
Grossmann
Grossmann on Mar 18 '07
Is this a squid or an octopus???? Be honest.
moodshine
moodshine on Mar 19 '07
ace, totaly random and wonderful.
virmanvunderbar
virmanvunderbar on Mar 19 '07
..cocktabrella.
llamaxsprinkles
llamaxsprinkles on Mar 19 '07
I like it but that fact that the lines are two different colors bothers me. But, i'd buy it nonetheless.
letsxdisco
letsxdisco on Mar 19 '07
I like the no-face
Scotticus
   Scotticus on Mar 19 '07
i'd wear this:) i love the soft tones 5$
phillyphobic
phillyphobic on Mar 19 '07
What's up with all the out of place aquatic animal submissions. Are they fun to draw?
TheloniusMnk
TheloniusMnk on Mar 19 '07
You couldn't have picked a worse placement. Sorry folks, putting your design in a random place on the shirt is not "interesting." In the center is the place to be. Any good designer will tell you that.



As for the design, I think it's pretty sweet, actually. Just one suggestion: the man and the octopus don't exactly blend. The man is minamalist (doesn't even have a face) and the octopus is fairly detailed. You've got two different art styles going on.
nickspharler
nickspharler on Mar 20 '07
:0
nickspharler
nickspharler on Mar 20 '07
amazing 5 $

facebreaker
facebreaker on Mar 20 '07
add some rain, please
moosebiscuit
moosebiscuit on Mar 20 '07
I'm not fond of the positioning but everything else is great. The guy does NOT need a face.
stevenove
stevenove on Mar 20 '07
I Love this Shirt. And to add to the battle: HE DOES NOT NEED A FACE! I love it the way it is right now.

$5
BLAKEGA
BLAKEGA on Mar 20 '07
Ha! Class.
rissajess
rissajess on Mar 20 '07
its a sextapus
Isidore
Isidore on Mar 20 '07
i think the image should be a little bit bigger, but other than that, it's great! $5
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