skeleton king!

I think more stippling inside the eye holes would make it look better... some shadowing to make them look hollow. I like the skull and the crown, but the arm bones and shoulders make the ribcage look a bit boxed in. I'd like to see a curvier ribcage with a little more detail. Also, why is he placed over on the left side of the shirt? Maybe centered would be better.

one of my favorites i have seen in a while. nice job

YES!!!
it took long enough to get here, $5 for taking my advice, all of it.
good luck.

Duncan?

yea darken up the eye holes, a bit. and maybe make it smaller. i like this because i really like the mexican Day of the Dead kind of stuff so this is cool.

I know that skeletons are practically taboo on Threadless but darn it...this is a cool tee.

Don't listen to them about darkening it. It reminds me of Edward Gorey.

your illustration is sooo good- but your presentation kinda hinders it.

still its a 5$

I'd also like to see what it would look like centered. Otherwise, awesome!

OK, it does look good centered, but if you vote on this and it wins, im going to try and get the hoodie to have the crown on the hood so it looks like you have a crown...but it would be on your hood so VOTE $5. thanks for the nice comments

TO SEE WHAT IT WOULD LOOK LIKE CENTERED GO HERE

http://www.threadless.com/critique/925/king


ITS THE CRITIQUE

I really like this style! Skulls aren't my thing... but your style helps overcome that :-)

I like it centered better (I'd still like a little more stippling in the eye holes, too). Also, there's one design where they have something (a horn?) coming out of their mouths and are wearing party hats. I think it would be hilarious to have one of those little party horns that uncurl when you blow into them in his mouth. I don't normally go for skeleton designs, but I love yours :)

nice! 5$

I dunno but I kinda like this.

i think im gonna change it up and submit a new skeleton, like a full body one not just hips up and give him the party hat and kazoo.. maybe ill make 2. but im gonna keep the style

Looks Tim Burton.........ish

i would reconsider the placement.

i like it without the body and with a little more detail in the skull

This is nice.

yes, please - more skeletons...