head girl
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3160 days ago
Submitted on:
Oct 03 '03
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1.71 from 304 votes
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I would like it much better without the text....great illustration though...I might buy without the text.
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i'm not thinking that i would ever want to see a guy OR a girl wearing that shirt
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Perhaps some lines to outline the legs? I also agree with the above about the text. I would push it a little more and see how you could make it work a little better in terms of composition. Looks like two elements all together and I think it should really flow. Actually looks kinda like 3 elements since those feet aren't connected. Another color tshirt may also fix that problem instead of outlines. Almost there, looks good.
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I love the image; I don't care for the text. Another image I’d like as a print, not a shirt.
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mr funkleberry,
instead of spamming the board with tons of designs, stick with one and make it kickass |
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drop the text
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Yep get rid of the text it dosnt relate to the image very well, if you like the text try and make the font more suitable for the image.
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theres a chain of budget accesorry outlets in australia by the same name - drop the text and i'd buy it
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i like the lack of outline on the legs. that's what makes it for me. and yeah, i'd lose the text.
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smaller&no text
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I agree, drop the text. I like the no-outline-of-the-legs effect.
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The no-outline legs are cool. I don't like the text, and I think she needs some eyes...........
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leave the girl alone, except some line features to suggest a nose and eyes......i like the no legs part and comp of the girl......please get rid of the text, that titles the piece and forces the viewer to associate the image with the text.....who knows what "head girl" means but my imagination thinks it knows.....or pick a feminine girlie font...like a script curly one.....but much smaller...would u really wear a girl that large on your shirt.....
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I agree with emilycecille.
Although I think this is your best work from a bad bunch. And get rid of the text, NOW! |
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The girl should be tiny on the shirt. But I like how the legs are essentially invisible.
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NO TEXT!!!
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image is cool. however the legs are a main part of a womans curves....I think they should show. :P
ya text is kinda lame. |
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Leave the legs to the imagination! Text does need to go tho.
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