top of the hair is a little off, make fewer and larger shapes.....or flip the hair vertical :)

thanks Abducted your the perfect critic, im learning alot

I think adding the shadow that you did to the text to the chick would be really cool.

I don't like the girls hat. This comes across as a tourist shirt to me for some reason.

Old Navy?...($orry)

just trying to help....i hopefully will submit soon...

I'd love to see some Abducted material :)

oh yeah....coming soon(contest time) nothing amazing......but buyable, yes!!

I wasn't being sarcastic Abducted. You've gone through all my designs (and there's a lot) and you've always offered considered helpful comments, thanks.

And thank you. I've run into some real cool people on this site and am becoming addicted. I've learned a lot and am glad that there's so many others like me. Overall we're all on the same wavelength. We all like to design for our own reasons. Self expression, anger management, humor, political, world peace, and it goes on forever.....It's all love. For you, I'd sayl--concentrate on 1 or 2 strong ideas that are based on a concept: like an ice cream truck that is melting,. Think about how people would react to seeing your shirt......wanna make them laugh, think? Step away from the computer and sketch some ideas. The best ideas come when you're not trying....trust me on that! I'll never type this much again, I hate when people do that. It makes them look like a know-it-all, which I know i'm not.