I am kind of confused aboutwhats going on. Is he worried about what might hatch? I think it needs some explaining and the placement too may need some re thinking.

the wraparound is a good idea

I don't understand "the story" of this shirt, either.

the point of the story is that this chick is the first one to hatch and soon after hatching he starting running and so the footprints are created. He turns back to find these footprints and himself gets surprised and scared that something is behind him or following him

i like the wrap around a lot a lot, it's really cute. i would buy this shirt.

here's the problem, what the fuck is up with those feathers? you put so much detail into them and they aren't proportionate to the bird. they're also way more colorful that the bird itself, the bird is a solid yellow but his lost feathers are three and four colors. i think if you made little cutesy yellow feathers, like ones that would actually fall off the bird it would make more sense
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Nevermind the feathers, Bubba! It´s cool. But I want the little birdie flying screaming away from the egg like the devil cat was chasing after him!

I like the use of space a lot! And the bird is cute, and the narrative may not come across really well on a shirt; but who cares? It looks sharp.

Love the wrap. But I never would have guessed your story line. Doesn't indicate running prints to me, or that he's motioning to the footprints in fear. I thought it was the egg, and that he was worried about his sibling not coming out yet. Very worthy attempt at this though!