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The Meticulous Examination of a Rather Delicious P by J-Ray

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Mar 05 '07

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Several color combinations are possible. Scientific observations without interference are difficult.

AliceChew on Mar 05 '07

I like the green on green. I want pie.

FRICKINAWESOME on Mar 05 '07

Good idea, but viewed from afar the pie looks like pacman or a leftover pizza. I like the black and pink color combo best tho.

J-Ray on Mar 05 '07

Haha, I love this one even though I think it'll score low. You should have seen the process I went through to make this (it involved me buying a pie and setting up a photoshoot).

J-Ray on Mar 05 '07

Yeah it's mean to look like a pie graph, which looks like pacman

Willish on Mar 05 '07

Mmm green pie.

helo on Mar 05 '07

Delicious concept ! The thicker linework on the smaller
sized designs in your presentation is the thickness I like.
The close up of the design has frail, thin lines.

Big cream pies to the face of
anyone who says, "No text."

bananaphone on Mar 05 '07

go pie.

melh696 on Mar 05 '07

heh, nice.

Edword on Mar 05 '07

hand drawn look, nice switch up j-ray.

Nice3WayGuys on Mar 05 '07

looks dulishus!

smart design $5

dank57 on Mar 05 '07

make it smaller, through some crumbs by the missing piece, and add the text: "i used to give 100%, but then i got hungry"

jenraskopf on Mar 05 '07

Love it. Once actually brought a pie into economics class for a presentation. Very hard to get precise percentages. Your drawing looks far better than the presentation did. Hope it gets a better grade!

mlnewco on Mar 05 '07

I like the linework & concept. The only area I have difficulty with is the slice portion. It is hard to distinguish the crust from the filling. Otherwise I like it.

anonymoose on Mar 05 '07

I like it, but then I don't at the same time. I think my difficulty with it is the same as mlnewco's comment about the crust vs. filling.

ecky_ducky on Mar 05 '07

I think i'd like the words capitalised. But it's sweet.

ecky_ducky on Mar 05 '07

I think i'd like the words capitalised. But it's sweet.

Vindemiatrix on Mar 05 '07

Agreed re: crust/filling. If you don't want to add another colour, maybe just do a darker shading for the filling?

Overall, though, it's cute and funny. :)

J-Ray on Mar 05 '07

I see what you guys are saying about the filling.. I squint my eyes and it looks darker, but I could have exaggerated it. The apple pie life model I had appeared to roughly the same color inside as out :-O

Answerthatandstayfashionable on Mar 05 '07

peepo + pie
?

Vindemiatrix on Mar 05 '07

You could try adding some horizontal lines in the place where the crust meets the filling to create a sharper contrast... (and you're right, I can see it when I squint too!)

martiandrivein on Mar 05 '07

mmm pi

truxdat on Mar 05 '07

pie is the best. go pie.

radiostaticstar on Mar 05 '07

yummers, khaki looks best...

The Crackers on Mar 05 '07

niiiiiiiiice

i love pie

and pie charts

they're delicious

5

PsyGuy on Mar 05 '07

XD... its pi!!
concept and design are superb ;)

miss mraz on Mar 05 '07

i like the design!

aliens on Mar 05 '07

looks like it came right out of one of my old my math books. good job

schleb on Mar 05 '07

YOU WIN A FIVE AND A DOLLAR SIGN.

liwintin on Mar 05 '07

haha~
i like it..it's simple and funny....$5

Jennifuhrer on Mar 06 '07

yummers

if it's apple or rhubarb, it's $5

ISABOA on Mar 06 '07

the pie looks so content - 5$

CsvlDaikun on Mar 06 '07

haha, "Precentage of pie remaining, as represented by this pie chart. Of pie."

carolann12582 on Mar 06 '07

chomp chomp pacman eating boob...thats what i was thinking..until i thought..mmmmm...pie...nice linework

thomasucks on Mar 07 '07

ahhh very funny!

Kornflak on Mar 07 '07

YUM! I like the grey.

mezo on Mar 07 '07

What is that? 65% of pie left? 70%?

corey8 on Mar 07 '07

great! i vote for blue.
5

lsmc88 on Mar 07 '07

this is nice. And i think that is 75% missing if you take into account the perspective

Digdag88 on Mar 07 '07

you keep track of that text.

ma17 on Mar 08 '07

Yup, definetly 75% of pie remaining! And I laughed out loud at CsvlDaikun suggestion. That would definetly be even funnier...

sr15min on Mar 08 '07

Pie is cooly funny

applegary on Mar 08 '07

I'm confused... I thought pie are square.

crunchygirl on Mar 08 '07

Fine job, just should have been a better pie model. I like 'em FAT. And the text is absolutely necessary.

Odelay on Mar 08 '07

Haha, looks like Pac Man!
Not that that's a bad thing.

The Good King on Mar 08 '07

I like pie, but not this one.

thatmaybeAWESOME on Mar 08 '07

LOSE THE TEXT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

J-Ray on Mar 08 '07

hahahaha nice reference to my other sub :)

sunkissdmidnights on Mar 09 '07

i like the text. the only thing i would suggest adding in would be a pan/side to it cause' the pie is kinda a pocket not a solid pie. (if that makes sense)