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Good idea, but viewed from afar the pie looks like pacman or a leftover pizza. I like the black and pink color combo best tho.
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Haha, I love this one even though I think it'll score low. You should have seen the process I went through to make this (it involved me buying a pie and setting up a photoshoot).
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make it smaller, through some crumbs by the missing piece, and add the text: "i used to give 100%, but then i got hungry"
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I like the linework & concept. The only area I have difficulty with is the slice portion. It is hard to distinguish the crust from the filling. Otherwise I like it.
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I like it, but then I don't at the same time. I think my difficulty with it is the same as mlnewco's comment about the crust vs. filling.
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Agreed re: crust/filling. If you don't want to add another colour, maybe just do a darker shading for the filling?
Overall, though, it's cute and funny. :) |
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You could try adding some horizontal lines in the place where the crust meets the filling to create a sharper contrast... (and you're right, I can see it when I squint too!)
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chomp chomp pacman eating boob...thats what i was thinking..until i thought..mmmmm...pie...nice linework
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Yup, definetly 75% of pie remaining! And I laughed out loud at CsvlDaikun suggestion. That would definetly be even funnier...
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Fine job, just should have been a better pie model. I like 'em FAT. And the text is absolutely necessary.
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i like the text. the only thing i would suggest adding in would be a pan/side to it cause' the pie is kinda a pocket not a solid pie. (if that makes sense)
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i feel like something is missing maybe some purple color for the filling... i don't know... nice illustration... 3.
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