All you need to do to mantain it is checking the oil

Cool, but looks kinda empty on a white shirt

haha nice machinery there, is it gas powered? :)

nice work there. if it wins, the print should be bigger so it's more to scale with what's going on inside.

and is that battery supposed to be the liver? if so.. that's pretty sweet, considering the liver provides energy for the rest of the body. no spleen?

I don't mind the colours, it's subtle - but works nicely...

nice execution.

i too, have bionic insides.

i'm with naisatoh in that 1) this is a really cool shirt and 2) it needs to be a little bit larger

I second Brett F.'s second. This shirt is a great design!

Sorry, I forgot: I do think that it needs to be on something other than white, but on the blue especially, it looks great!

i like it in red

This is a great design, I agree that the colors are a bit off right now.

if it was not on white, I would buy it for sure

oh never mind.. love it and willing to buy it!

Very nice, but I'd take the halftoners away.

*halftones

Yeah, would prefare it without the half tone background. Really great illustration and concept though. I like it on the red best because it reminds me of human organs more O_o

i like everything exept the blue background.

awesome but don't like on white ;)

Interesting, but this is begging for color. And ditch the halftone circle in the back.

I think the circle looks good on the blue version, but I definitely don't thinks it works on the red.

no halftones.

the halftones aren't needed at all. Distracts from the awesome design.
This works so well on any color except white. How cool would this be if the white color was printed in metallic silver?

I would resub this as soon as possible on without the halftones. With Metallic silver instead of white. Make the blue outlines something like a dark grey. And make the print a LITTLE smaller so that it doesn't go over any seams and would be no larger than 16" tall.

But, that's just me...

I'm giving it a 3 as is. But if you did those things I really think it would be a FIVE! +$

thanks for your comments, i shuold have uploaded it to the Critiques before, i hope threadless let me resub this one.

yeah, drop that halftone behind it. pretty cool.

def. without halftones, cool concept! :)

looks good on red. nice shirt.

really nice, i especially enjoy the concept

SUPER concept, but I want more color

love. deff on the red
5$$

I like the concept too. People do "mechanical organs" from time to time but they never seem to "click" with me. Hmm.

Definitely would look better on a red or dark blue shirt. Nice concept and design.

$5 and maybe a buy...

This is really well drawn... but did I miss some sort of internal organ contest? Otherwise 5

Hooray for red tees! And the design is awesome, too.

i've definately rated at least two more things like this today
this is my fave, though