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alvarejo
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All you need to do to mantain it is checking the oil
jumpenthusiasm
jumpenthusiasm on Mar 05 '07
Cool, but looks kinda empty on a white shirt
J-Ray
J-Ray on Mar 05 '07
haha nice machinery there, is it gas powered? :)
naisatoh
naisatoh on Mar 05 '07
nice work there. if it wins, the print should be bigger so it's more to scale with what's going on inside.
naisatoh
naisatoh on Mar 05 '07
and is that battery supposed to be the liver? if so.. that's pretty sweet, considering the liver provides energy for the rest of the body. no spleen?
bektravels
bektravels on Mar 05 '07
I don't mind the colours, it's subtle - but works nicely...
lunchboxbrain
lunchboxbrain on Mar 05 '07
nice execution.
melh696
   melh696 on Mar 05 '07
i too, have bionic insides.
Brett F.
Brett F. on Mar 05 '07
i'm with naisatoh in that 1) this is a really cool shirt and 2) it needs to be a little bit larger
eaglejon
eaglejon on Mar 05 '07
I second Brett F.'s second. This shirt is a great design!
eaglejon
eaglejon on Mar 05 '07
Sorry, I forgot: I do think that it needs to be on something other than white, but on the blue especially, it looks great!
jesse1025x
jesse1025x on Mar 05 '07
i like it in red
lindz
lindz on Mar 05 '07
This is a great design, I agree that the colors are a bit off right now.
tehanna
tehanna on Mar 05 '07
if it was not on white, I would buy it for sure
tehanna
tehanna on Mar 05 '07
oh never mind.. love it and willing to buy it!
Petanca
Petanca on Mar 06 '07
Very nice, but I'd take the halftoners away.
Petanca
Petanca on Mar 06 '07
*halftones
kidderliverpool
kidderliverpool on Mar 06 '07
Yeah, would prefare it without the half tone background. Really great illustration and concept though. I like it on the red best because it reminds me of human organs more O_o
Badrissell
Badrissell on Mar 06 '07
i like everything exept the blue background.
lowel
lowel on Mar 07 '07
awesome but don't like on white ;)
mezo
   mezo on Mar 07 '07
Interesting, but this is begging for color. And ditch the halftone circle in the back.
RookieRose
RookieRose on Mar 07 '07
I think the circle looks good on the blue version, but I definitely don't thinks it works on the red.
mmmmichelleeee
mmmmichelleeee on Mar 07 '07
no halftones.
jpiatt
   jpiatt on Mar 07 '07
the halftones aren't needed at all. Distracts from the awesome design.
This works so well on any color except white. How cool would this be if the white color was printed in metallic silver?

I would resub this as soon as possible on without the halftones. With Metallic silver instead of white. Make the blue outlines something like a dark grey. And make the print a LITTLE smaller so that it doesn't go over any seams and would be no larger than 16" tall.

But, that's just me...
jpiatt
   jpiatt on Mar 07 '07
I'm giving it a 3 as is. But if you did those things I really think it would be a FIVE! +$
alvarejo
   alvarejo on Mar 07 '07
thanks for your comments, i shuold have uploaded it to the Critiques before, i hope threadless let me resub this one.
rpolich
rpolich on Mar 08 '07
yeah, drop that halftone behind it. pretty cool.
angelito
angelito on Mar 08 '07
def. without halftones, cool concept! :)
applegary
applegary on Mar 08 '07
looks good on red. nice shirt.
Skipper17
Skipper17 on Mar 08 '07
really nice, i especially enjoy the concept
IAmAMonster
IAmAMonster on Mar 09 '07
SUPER concept, but I want more color
TheBritt
TheBritt on Mar 10 '07
love. deff on the red
5$$
The Winged Self
The Winged Self on Mar 10 '07
I like the concept too. People do "mechanical organs" from time to time but they never seem to "click" with me. Hmm.
Sinareo
Sinareo on Mar 11 '07
Definitely would look better on a red or dark blue shirt. Nice concept and design.

$5 and maybe a buy...
SparklyScorpy
SparklyScorpy on Mar 11 '07
This is really well drawn... but did I miss some sort of internal organ contest? Otherwise 5
Adnamaeel
Adnamaeel on Mar 11 '07
Hooray for red tees! And the design is awesome, too.
Digdag88
Digdag88 on Mar 11 '07
i've definately rated at least two more things like this today
this is my fave, though
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