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Good idea, but the letter shapes aren't working. Maybe outlining the flags so the white edge areas don't get lost, or change tee color and print the white? Dunno.
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If you could put the flags on the diagonal part of the N skewed to the right, like \_\, I think you could solve the readability problem without an outline - I think an outline would be bad.
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Why isn't the American flag the first one featured? Terrorist! I kid. Good work, could be improved, but ok as is.
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I think it would be better to outline the flags. Japan and South Korea especially look weird, so "open" like that.
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MooCowMoo, I think you might be confusing the Japanese flag with Bangladesh and South Korea...
and there's only 5 colors minus the white of the T-shirt itself. |
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I really like the concept, and I agree the N needs some work.
The dyslexic in me read Untie, and I was very confused. |
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To be honest, to me it feels....bland. I think it could make a stronger statement with something offsetting or ironic like "divide" instead of "unite."
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cool idea, but it needs something extra. it's so boring on just white, and your letters are a little weird--especially the "n".
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One problem I think is that the shirt is white. The whites of the flags make the letters hard to distinguish.
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