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Feb 28 '07
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AnderMoore

About my design

by AnderMoore
I like aesthetic simplicity... I hope more of you do.
AnderMoore
AnderMoore on Feb 28 '07
Flight, as in "Time Flies"

I wish clocks looked like this.
cease_a_roni
cease_a_roni on Feb 28 '07
i like it. :o)
unizou
unizou on Feb 28 '07
I like it but seems something is missing... need more colors?
SOLS
SOLS on Feb 28 '07
i think this could be much smaller and perhaps in another location - the current size and placment make it looks like something should be in the center . . .
The Winged Self
The Winged Self on Feb 28 '07
you could play with maybe bottom left or bottom right placement, but I like the simplicity of it. Or maybe "break up" the circle a bit? like, keep the birds in a circular shape, but it looks like a perfect circle and that draws your attention away from the actual birds. Just my $.02
Rosy Posie
Rosy Posie on Feb 28 '07
$5 I'll buy it. Reminds me of the owl in the Labyrinth.
slr_ecoli
slr_ecoli on Mar 01 '07
I really like how in your close up you have the white outlines around the birds. Add that to the final design? As is still a 5 though.
sevententacles
sevententacles on Mar 02 '07
well that isn't a terrific bore at all, really
AliceChew
AliceChew on Mar 02 '07
That would be a sweet design for a clock, good thinkin.
tirethminet
tirethminet on Mar 02 '07
good idea for a clock, but i'd suggest less of the inbetweens and putting them in a line instead of a circle for the tee.

and maybe at least one more color on the birds for definition so that one may know what they are?

sorry if i sound mean, just pointing out some things to make it more consumer-friendly. n_n;
Jemae
   Jemae on Mar 02 '07
Very Imaginative/Interesting Idea! =)
FlySouth
FlySouth on Mar 02 '07
That is gorgeous. 5.
hxcassandra
hxcassandra on Mar 03 '07
the white outlining looks so good.
resettheyears
resettheyears on Mar 04 '07
i'm all for simplicity, but i think the birds could use a little more detail or be cleaned up around the edges. some of them don't resemble birds at all. interesting idea, though and i'd score higher if you resubmit a cleaner design.
Digdag88
Digdag88 on Mar 04 '07
jonathon livingston seagull?
JuliusB
JuliusB on Mar 05 '07
work on the colors, it could be really nice
ReverseJesus
ReverseJesus on Mar 06 '07
reminds me of abes oddysee / exodus. nice design tho.
TheGord
TheGord on Mar 06 '07
The birds need the white outlines - looks way better that way. They look good on the khaki background.
kilyth
kilyth on Mar 07 '07
Someone's been playing Abe's Oddysee. I love it! $5



There's a pic of one here: http://www.oddworld.com/games/abesodd/ao_gamescreens.shtml

It's in the second last row, second from the left
kilyth
kilyth on Mar 07 '07
Consequently, I'd like different colours
AnderMoore
AnderMoore on Mar 07 '07
What???? I'm particularly confused...
kilyth
kilyth on Mar 08 '07
There's a game called Abe's Oddysee, in which you have to lead captives to bird portals in order to release them. The bird portals look EXACTLY like your tee design. Check out the link I posted for more info.
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