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I thinks it's lovely - but hard to interprete.
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I have the same comments I had when you put it up for critique. You need to remove the needles and blood before I'd ever wear it. I like the mice with the ear-wings though, but I think you would make the composition a lot more interesting. For now, I can't give you a high score.
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Mice with ear-wings... surprising and lovely. Needles with blood, not so much. I am with Alebot, I couldn't wear it as is. However, I'm giving it a four simply for those gorgeous humice.
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i think maybe one mouse woukld suffice.
and i also think you can relate the idea of animal experimentation a lot better than with a blood-filled needle. i don't have any suggestions, but i dunno....not a needle. |
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Thank you for your comments. I agree that it could go without the needles.
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I think taking out the 2 side sets of needles would be ok. Leave the one set in the middle.
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I'm with Alebot.. as I don't see any changes my same comments from the critique apply. I'd have to give it a low score as I feel the needles & the use of reflection were sort of cop-outs for finishing the design.
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^^pyralis:
This was actually part of a much bigger project - I simplified it to submit it here. I agree that I could have done a lot more with it, though. The original: http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/48678162/?qo=4&q=by%3Athecolorwhite&qh=sort%3Atime+-in%3Ascraps |
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I like it, but I couldn't wear it...it would bum me out too much.
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resub without the needles and i'd buy it
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lose the needles and you have a contender.
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it be cool if it was just the mouse with the ear. it'd make a statement.
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This makes me so sad. My health teacher made my class watch a video about this once. If you lost the syringes and didn't use copy/paste mice I would definitely buy this.
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Flying Mouse on Feb 21 '07 Nice concept!
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i love everything about this, honestly. the concept and message are great, i just think you would have better luck selling this as an editorial cartoon. it's just a little sad as a t-shirt.
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i know the concepts !! i really love the idea !!
i saw it on tv, when all the scientists create the project that the cells can rebuild the skin structure, so the victims of the accidents who lost their ear, can have their ear back. great design.. |
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reminds me of an episode of nip/tuck when rosie o'donnell gets her ear chopped of and then has a replacement grown on a mouse.
i think it would look better without the needles. |
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