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I would like this better if it were just that pair of lungs and nothing else. Those lungs are awesome.
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yeah, i agree that the placement should be changed. I've never been able to draw feet. They never seem to match the person.
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I dont see what makes it the best surprise. I'd be scared into another heart attack if little hearts were dancing on my chest.
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kinda poor execution. but maybe thats just the style you're going for. i think a little more detail wouldn't have hurt
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The feet probably look wrong because they're too far away to be that big. unless they're actually Giant. :)
And I don't think he's woken up yet. Or the painkillers are making him see things. ;) |
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yeah, im not much of an artist lol, but thanks for the critisism. Maybe i will rework this design and add more detail later.
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I like the concept....but it definitely could use some work. Something about the bed and blanket looks weird.
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i think it may need to show that it's an actual birthday party ....like streamers maybe?
maybe add in a doctor? |
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"Then when Billy saw the surprise... he died. Apparently it's always a good idea to keep your vital organs in your body"
ha ha, kidding. I give this a four. |
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Oy, [smacks forehead]. Lol j/k, funnel. I like the idea, but at the same time, it is very poorly executed.
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hah!
four little organs jumping on the bed, the stomach fell off and bumped his head. In came the doctor and the doctor said "are you sure the anaesthesic was all Billy was on?" |
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