the melting would be cooler and more accesible i think for a larger audience if instead of being red, it were something softer like blue or green. The red looks like bleeding. Really cool drawing, and i would buy it if it didnt look like bleeding.
i'd prefer it without the hole at the bottom, it's kinda distracting...but it looks like you are aware of that yourself, since you've kind of "hidden" it away in the presentation. i'm gonna give you a straight critique since i respect your skills, please don't take it the wrong way:)
a lot of your designs are freaking awesome, but more often than not they're burdened down bu superfluous elements that pull the focus away from the best bits. i'd like to see head n' shoulders in this HUGE on the shirt, it looks great with the pacific blue..$4
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