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Oh, you should have refined the concept using the critique section first. I love the concept too -- but it can be better executed.
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Thanks. What would you do differently? I considered the critique section, but I always end up with something that's not me.
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I like it...however it missing something...i'm not quite sure what, perhaps the line quality of the outlined stomach bothers me, it's too consistent...
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It's a larva. The larva represents new love/renewed love. You think the stomach line should be thicker and thinner in places?
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click for larger view
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well, i for one like the art. the lines are well done in my opinion, especially after looking at the larger view. you get a good score from me!
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I get the butterflies in the stomach concept...but why the spider's web?
That just kinda creeps me out. |
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