i think its a good concept.

i agree. nice morph. are you making any sort of statement or just playing on the similarity of form?

its a train gun. thats the basic statement.

POW, right in the kisser!

I like this a lot. What similarity between the gun and the train are you working with?

It looks good, but I also wonder "why."

By the way, do I sense a Radiohead fan in the designer?

:)

I would like a gun train -

I don't get it. Guns are bad, mkay.

$5

why yes you do sense a radiohead fan. yeah basically thats it... playing off of the idea of their simialrity... i started with just a train then noticed the similarity and went for it.

Neat concept. I wish it was a little tighter ( more detail ).

alternate title maybe : Bullet Train

I likes it. 4.

Not bad

Don't get it

Clean up the trace and you're a sure winner for originality.

oh jesus, the live trace is killing me

Yeah I agree with helo, "Bullet Train" would be nice. That would give you a reason for doing a train gun. It would be a play on words. I really like the concept, but I'd like to see it rendered in a different style. Right now it looks too much like "live-trace" or "Cutout Filter." Maybe an actual line drawing scanned in and painted. That's just my opinion.

I think you should add some tracks.

yeah it does look a bit live traced... but i hand traced it in illustrator... yeah bullet train would have been good i guess.

hahahahahah to catchpole11.

POW RIGHT IN THE KISSER. POW RIGHT IN THE KISSER. POW RIGHT IN THE KISSER.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

SHUT UP YOU CAN'T HEAR ME. POW RIGHT IN THE KISSER.

!

4.

I like it, but in order to win on threadless you need to have some stupid title that makes sense of an even more stupid picture. This is pretty straight forward.

it's a cool idea for a visual, but i wouldn't wear it unless it was a lot cleaner.

I like it alot just how it is. I think more detail would be a bad thing... When I first saw it, I saw a gun, but then almost instantly saw a train. With more detail, people will either see just a gun or just a train(whichever the detailing favors) and be done with it. And thats a nono.

When I saw this shirt I thought of suicide kinda, because I know of someone who shot theirself and someone who jumped infront of a moving train. I don't know if anyone else thought the same...

I like "Bullet Train" also, and it does need to be cleaned up - if it were, I'd wear it.

the train isn't in the right angle

I'd agree with most of 'em here. Needs cleaning up/detail and possibly fixing the angle of the train.

so should i clean up and reenter????

^ sure ! go for it !