Shaolin: "Buddhas Fist"
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Sep 30 '03
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i think there's entirely too much going on.
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the illustration looks nice but I think the weight of the blue overpowers the white. Actually move buddha fist under Shaolin and make illo a little smaller for an extra point.
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It could even work if either the "shaolin" or the chinese characters were removed.
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i really dont like the illo. and what does it say on the bottom right?
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Bit messy... maybe try less elements.
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Too many type faces. What are the 8's? Graphically interesting though and good illustration work.
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As a buddhist, I take pity upon you. As a designer, I'm appalled.
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jajaj
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I'd lbuy it with the "shaolin" and "buddha fist" removed
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I'd buy it without the 'shaolin' and the 'bhudda fist' and the 8s and the japanese symbols and the image, and the type on the bottom right.
So yeah, i'd just buy the khaki shirt. :/ I dont think it says much for bhuddism (i'm not too knowledgable on it, but i think the image is actually going against the main principles of it) and someone would probably take offense to it. I'll give you a 1 just for submitting though. |
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Can't say I like this design much. Too many different fonts, 8's and random things, not to mention a poorly drawn Shaolin Munk.
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whoa angry buddhists everywhere! I always thought buddhists were a much easier going religion and weren't as petty when it came to things like this.... im sure if i asked buddha for permission to print this t-shirt he'd smile and laugh at the way you're carrying on. britannica thats really constructive thanks dipsh1t
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looks very buddhist punk
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Ignore these angry designers who have nothing helpful to say, i think that you have alot of potential. You should draw the illustration by hand first and then scan it in and trace it, you will have a better sense of proportion and scale instead of letting the computer design for you. I think that you have too much going on all at once and there is very little to focus on, keep at it!
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yeah alc... hey after you draw it, flip it and look at it from different angles. that will make you see the real drawing....
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I'd choose a focus, and make it stand out. My eye bounces around over the graphic. It needs a place to rest. Plus the amount of different fonts agitate the overall idea. Unless that was intended, I'd stick to one or two fonts.
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Yea I'm kinda confused as to what is actually on there...I mean I have the budda pic down but the rest jus makes it all to confusing.
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