carrion my wayward son
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Feb 13 '07
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2.17 from 2,221 votes
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I don't like the obvious edges of the print area (try working the background a bit). I like the overall design and colors, though.
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noted, thanks.
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mezo on Feb 13 '07 I don't mind the background, since it's nicely distressed and light. I DO think the color choices (from the inks to the shirt) are all a bit strange....and at first sight, I thought the birds were wearing bras. The idea is ok, if not a little cliche, and I like the diagonal lines of the wires. Maybe if the colors were different and the guitars were more clear, this would get a higher score...but for now a 3.
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I hate the spongy look in the background. It would be 100% better without it.
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Tonteau on Feb 13 '07 I love the pun. Not mad on the design.
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oh i thought they had backpacks on.... Like Carry-Ons. Yeah, the guitars need definition.
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I don't like the background box around the image. If there is a background I'd like to see less obvious rectilinear borders. I'd rather see more of a vignette feel.
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I could tell they were guitars but I don't like them, otherwise I love the design. I have thing about powerlines.
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if there wasn't any purple stuff behind everything. it'd be much better
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guitars are a little small. But I'm not sure how one would fix that. Nice though.
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Fxcking amazing =] I like the colours.
I think the powerlines should extend around the shirt a bit. |
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I guitar hero'd that song last night.
I tore shit up. |
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i think this is beautiful.
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i'd like it without the purple stuff and on a different colored shirt. gotta love birds though.
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t4$
just change the color of the shirt, thanks |
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WANT!
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I think it would be cool without the gutiars, but then that would screw up your whole philosophical idea. Still pretty nice tho, and the colors work well
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guitars*
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it feels live traced/traced in flash or whatever you did. lose that background color and give them diff instruments (more drastically different guitars and/or a diff instruemtn)
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I don't like the rectangle that the distressing forms. I would absolutely love this if the purplish-gray were a little more free-form.
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I don't really like the rectangular bg.
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this design would work much better in a 16:9 sort of 'widescreen' format...lose the spongey stuff and reduce in size
i'm diggin the concept, though |
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If you dont mind, me asking how did you achieve the look. Very nice , i would buy it.
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agree with alebot at top: i'd buy if you got rid of the obvious edges
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make the edges less obvious and this rules.
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yay.
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i think it'd be pretty tight without the guitars. nice design.
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it just bores me
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this is creative(: i like the birdies with the guitar!(: fantastico (=
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I laughed when I saw this :)
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I'm pretty sure Kansas is amazing...as is this shirt.
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I love your style and color choices here! And I think the background is really cool - it could be a bit less boxy, but it's not bad at all the way it is. Maybe if you put strings&other details on the guitars they would be more obviously guitars. (Keep the bright contrast color though - that's important.) 5555555
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Actually, I take it back about putting strings on the guitars. Don't do it. It's totally obvious what they are. Everybody else is nuts!
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