Venator Obscura
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Feb 09 '07
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i like the idea and the design.
but the position...maybe make it a little bit bigger on the tee or move it a bit to the left...? the colours are great. |
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mezo on Feb 09 '07 Very pretty, though, the little hunting dude seems to be placed unfortunately. For he is on nipple island. Other than that & I think the deer antlers are too fat for it's head, it's not bad. I love that soft yellow color.
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I think you positioned it to center the whole thing, factoring in the hunter, yes? I think if you just centered the main "clearing" area, and left the hunter off to the side, it would look better, also enhancing the stealthy quality to the hunter.
it's a clean illo, btw. |
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The antlers are far too big
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Why the antlers like that?
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Why the antlers like that?
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I like the oversized antlers, it shows the animal to be old and majestic. Making it a kill worthy animal so to speak. I like it, however I'm not too sure I like the plants in the lower left hand corner, Im partial to more realistic elements and these look kind of sci-fi...4 nonetheless
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This is really nice. I think the design is fine. The antlers are good and original. Even as I will be submitting something to compete, this is a well done shirt and one I'd wear. $5
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I happen to like the antlers. A lot! I think it could be a little bigger on the shirt overall, though.
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Love it! $5
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No gunman, w/out is better.
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Hey, it's you again!
Kickass shirt. |
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Like it on green
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hunters hunt for the "big antlers" only
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Nice contrast... the deer scene is so beautiful, and then there's the hunter... oh no!
The hunter looks a little awkward though... and perhaps you could play with his positioning? (Make it more diagonally positioned, a little in front of the design.) |
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hey, "lesquelette", i think the gunman is the whole point of the title of the shirt. it wouldn't mean a whole lot if he wasn't there.
great shirt. |
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woo! another sub by you! yay! I love the colors! took me a bit to see the hunter but it's great :)
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that's nigh on megaloceras! huge antlers- ace!
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I like this a lot, especially how the hunter's so subtle in the corner (but do note that it's on the Isle of Nip, as mezo mentioned). Also, maybe unify the hunter with the scene so that he doesn't seem so isolated off to the side?
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the antlers are bothersome... needs more detail, but otherwise nice
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i love this. 5$ and buy
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(small print looks best)
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(also i do think more detail would be nice)
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