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Sep 25 '03
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Haranator

About my design

by Haranator
This is just a simple bit of geometry. Can't decide if it could use more detail.
jo-jo
jo-jo on Sep 25 '03
more detail would spoil this design. I like it.
nopattern
   nopattern on Sep 25 '03
it looks like the skateboard company Habitat's design gone horribly ugly
Haranator
Haranator on Sep 25 '03
Thanks for your comments, both of you.



Especially nopattern.
mattsiah
mattsiah on Sep 26 '03
It lacks "essense".
Haranator
Haranator on Sep 26 '03
Please define "essense" so I know what to add next time.
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]-[x]-[ on Sep 26 '03
Neat, but the mismatch of the two "branches" in the lower right really bothers me.
2 days later
izak
izak on Sep 29 '03
yah i saw that too...and it makes me throw things...make it go away!
Kornflak
Kornflak on Oct 01 '03
Does it say 'dodd'?
MIJA
MIJA on Oct 01 '03
This looks more like an idea for a direction than a finished piece. Kinda like Illustrator hicupped and threw a couple of shapes together. Not bad for a direction, but could definitely use more work.
2 days later
Haranator
Haranator on Oct 03 '03
Yeah, I really want to do something more with this. It's more of a prototype.

Next one'll be quite different.
14 days later
Seethe
Seethe on Oct 18 '03
Strange... I think it should really go the opposite way, and stretch up to the right shoulder to catch the eye's attention. Maybe a black background would create more contrast, and some red graffiti on the left shoulder perhaps? Sorry, I'm getting carried away.
9 days later
smbiotk
smbiotk on Oct 27 '03
in response to the comment on mine, I had to check your stuff out. For this one, yes it's creative, but does it get lost in that creativity? Where is the message, is there one, does there need to be one. In my opinion, this might need some more definition, I agree with seethe, maybe some graf inspired line work on the sleeve, or even an offset varying line weight outline of the piece or sections of the piece, overall, pretty damn good.
255 days later
ayami
ayami on Jul 09 '04
i see peas and a choo choo train. maybe if it was smaller? but i likey
232 days later
George Chamoun
George Chamoun on Feb 27 '05
it's trying too hard not to be popular design.



plus, the green doesn't mix well with the gray.
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