biomachinery
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3166 days ago
Submitted on:
Sep 25 '03
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15 comments
Average score:
1.03 from 309 votes
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more detail would spoil this design. I like it.
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nopattern on Sep 25 '03 it looks like the skateboard company Habitat's design gone horribly ugly
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Thanks for your comments, both of you.
Especially nopattern. |
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It lacks "essense".
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Please define "essense" so I know what to add next time.
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Neat, but the mismatch of the two "branches" in the lower right really bothers me.
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2 days later
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yah i saw that too...and it makes me throw things...make it go away!
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Does it say 'dodd'?
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This looks more like an idea for a direction than a finished piece. Kinda like Illustrator hicupped and threw a couple of shapes together. Not bad for a direction, but could definitely use more work.
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2 days later
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Yeah, I really want to do something more with this. It's more of a prototype.
Next one'll be quite different. |
14 days later
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Strange... I think it should really go the opposite way, and stretch up to the right shoulder to catch the eye's attention. Maybe a black background would create more contrast, and some red graffiti on the left shoulder perhaps? Sorry, I'm getting carried away.
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9 days later
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in response to the comment on mine, I had to check your stuff out. For this one, yes it's creative, but does it get lost in that creativity? Where is the message, is there one, does there need to be one. In my opinion, this might need some more definition, I agree with seethe, maybe some graf inspired line work on the sleeve, or even an offset varying line weight outline of the piece or sections of the piece, overall, pretty damn good.
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255 days later
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i see peas and a choo choo train. maybe if it was smaller? but i likey
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232 days later
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it's trying too hard not to be popular design.
plus, the green doesn't mix well with the gray. |
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