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1007 days ago
Submitted on:
Feb 12 '07
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57 comments
Final average score:
2.83 out of 5
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Jesse Mack
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by Jesse Mack   
Disorder can often be a lot more therapeutic.
alinka
alinka on Feb 12 '07
this is cool
MooseDinner
MooseDinner on Feb 12 '07
I think the broken rake thingy should be closer to the center.
Masterpeace
Masterpeace on Feb 12 '07
i like this
martiandrivein
martiandrivein on Feb 12 '07
if this doesn't get printed, it'll be a fluke
quietine
quietine on Feb 12 '07
i thought i was the only one! $5
d3d
   d3d on Feb 12 '07
nice.
WanderingBert
   WanderingBert on Feb 12 '07
Looks awesome on the shirt. Good job.
LockeMonda
LockeMonda on Feb 12 '07
I don't think it needs the rack at all. The footprints say it all.
castle
   castle on Feb 12 '07
cool.
mag391
mag391 on Feb 13 '07
rake makes it, but the sand lines should continue underneath it. This should be a print.
jelita78
jelita78 on Feb 13 '07
i didn't know it was a rake until i read moosedinner comment.
maybe u shud work on the rake a bit more.
other than that,i like the idea..very fresh and creative..
it looks good too on tee..
mushrush
mushrush on Feb 13 '07
I'd like to see the rake obviously broken over one of the rocks.

I mean the story's complete, so at this point it's just details.

Genius though.
Tuppe
Tuppe on Feb 13 '07
I think the footprints shouldn't be black. Or did he walk through tar before? I'd rather see them as impressions in the raked gravel/sand.
Petanca
Petanca on Feb 13 '07
I'm not sure people would get it without the text, but now that i read it I think it's very nice.
manlooon
   manlooon on Feb 13 '07
This is great! 5
Alebot
Alebot on Feb 13 '07
Great! Doesn't need any text or anything.
KBShakedown
KBShakedown on Feb 13 '07
The title cracks me up. And the design is top notch. I would not only buy this, I would purchase it.
masterchefnatty
masterchefnatty on Feb 13 '07
I always wonder about how they get out! Oh my gosh. I need this. Genius.
mezo
   mezo on Feb 13 '07
Really rad idea and flow, however the footprints are too stark. They look like blak vinyl placed on top of sand, instead of foot impressions. I don't know if you meant to make the one upper left rock look like a shark fin, but it makes me laugh. 4
gamejunkie
gamejunkie on Feb 13 '07
this is great 5$
GoldenWasp
GoldenWasp on Feb 13 '07
I nreally like this idea..5 and buy.
donkeyisland
donkeyisland on Feb 13 '07
Love this 5 buy
chelly
chelly on Feb 13 '07
the execution is great but as a shirt i wouldn't get it because the anger part is so tiny, just that broken rake. if i hadn't seen that, i would have thought the person walked off because they were done. might have been fun to have the sand make an angry face or something. 4
shirtflirt
shirtflirt on Feb 13 '07
disorder?
TAZL
TAZL on Feb 13 '07
This amazing. It gets more complex the more you look at it, and the textures are amazing. $5, and I hope it gets printed
nonolarson
   nonolarson on Feb 13 '07
Like mezo said it looks like sharks in water, well it's what i thought at first. And yeah for putting the rake on the sand rather than outside. ^^ And I love disorder.
Polymath
Polymath on Feb 13 '07
I got it completely, the garden, sand, rake, everything. Works for me.
jett
jett on Feb 13 '07
cool.
genome_hacker
genome_hacker on Feb 13 '07
I agree with MooseDinner. But it's awesome. $5
kava
kava on Feb 13 '07
i like it $4
FRICKINAWESOME
   FRICKINAWESOME on Feb 14 '07
Wouldn't this picture and meaning be about 3,001.49380492 times funnier if there were slight frowns, grimaces and overall unease depicted in the smoothness of the lines that the man drew out unintentionally that further made him uncomfortable and pissed about the whole calming garden concept? Still, fantastique concept.
aniki21
aniki21 on Feb 14 '07
I love it just for the Tōri gate and the tree in the background.

(I've been playing Ōkami)
VickersE90
VickersE90 on Feb 14 '07
That's just great! I agree that either the rake should be moved up, or the swirls continued under it, but this should definitely be printed after being tweaked.
AndrewDBarker
AndrewDBarker on Feb 14 '07
As said by Architecture In Helsinki ... It'5! :)

I would totally buy it.
Anddreha
Anddreha on Feb 14 '07
Perfect the way it is.
kdr
kdr on Feb 14 '07
i feel the same way, man! :)
JoshPease
JoshPease on Feb 14 '07
Pretty sweet shirt. It's a lot better than most. I'm not really a big fan of humorous shirts though.
deftoned
deftoned on Feb 14 '07
the rake should be over the swirls, but apart from that, great t
Ruefulstar
Ruefulstar on Feb 14 '07
Too funny.
Id buy $5
Stronglikebull
Stronglikebull on Feb 14 '07
Very Cool! 5
bhoomika
bhoomika on Feb 14 '07
Haha! I like this one!
$5
lemonalle
lemonalle on Feb 15 '07
Neat
R G
   R G on Feb 15 '07
soften the footprint and its a winner. good idea
Shalom
Shalom on Feb 15 '07
Great design! I agree that if this one doesn't get printed, something had to have gone awry.
biesdesignstudio
biesdesignstudio on Feb 15 '07
Great concept, good illo, but the lack of proper perspective as the feet approach the horizon really throws me off and makes it unwearable for me. As RG said, soften the footstep and this will be a winner.

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Krista x Face
Krista x Face on Feb 15 '07
Yea... fix the footprints... XD
transparentman
transparentman on Feb 16 '07
this is pretty awesome
Noobits
Noobits on Feb 16 '07
Id like to see the rake: half on the ground each side of one rock. as mentioned earlier. the footprints maybe should be the same grey as the texture in the sand. Its a great design I likee lotsee
therecouldbenothingafterThis
I love the ideas... the foot print colors definetly need to blend a little more.. more subtle.. and possibly the placement of the rake. please work on it and resub! i want one. :-)
potphish
potphish on Feb 16 '07
i'm at peace...
schonste
schonste on Feb 17 '07
HECK YEAH
Jebs
   Jebs on Feb 17 '07
the idea is pretty fun... but the prints are not smooth enough... well, still nice: 5
sevententacles
sevententacles on Feb 18 '07
ha
helloimkaley
helloimkaley on Feb 19 '07
Humm, perhaps if you had the swirls go down about half as long as they do and keep the rocks how they are, but move the rack and the footprints up to the new ending on the swirls? If that made any sense? I still like the idea a lot. :)
froggurts
froggurts on Feb 19 '07
Huh? I do not get the point.......
Dr0
Dr0 on Feb 19 '07
what a harsh reality..
it makes a good concept though..
I like it..
99 days later
therecouldbenothingafterThis
Congrats on the print!!
Edword
   Edword on May 30 '07
congrats!
108 days later
HumanFrailty
HumanFrailty on Sep 15 '07
Print the Kosher Krew and The Vikings are Workplace hazards!!
275 days later
180ronin
180ronin on Jun 17 '08
they need to reprint this i so want one!!!
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