Suitable for sagestone or classic pink.

This is my first submission to Threadless. Any feedback is welcome.



Danielle x



P.S. I used to live in those flats.

I love the design. So much in fact I wish it were bigger. Nice first submit!

I agree, it could be bigger. Nice work, and I look forward to seeing more from you!

I also think it could be bigger. Nice colour selection though ;)

thats awessome. like it alot =]

Thanks for the encouraging comments so far...really appreciate the feedback. :)

id buy it ona different color

tis beautiful

i like everything about it. nice design, nice choice of colors, good placement. if it could be larger vertically id' be nice. but still a 5

Lovely design, great placement.



Slightly bigger, please?

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I'm guessing that means I can't do anything about the size or tee colour now. Oh well, that'll teach me not to submit as critique! I will know for my third tee anyway (second is already pending approval).



It's a shame I can't resize it but as regards the colour, I'm sure every tee I've scored has had a "$5 on a different colour" post somewhere in the comments, so not too miffed about that.



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beautiful 5$

I like it, maybe a bit bigger and placed just a little bit higher

maybe have it a little bigger so it will come up more vertically on the shirt.

i really like the design. the splatter effect is quite cool and i like how the birds contrast nicely. absolutely awesome.

you know what's even worse than random designs? Birds randomly splashed over random designs.

^agreed

I have seen a design just like it in Print magazine. On a T-shirt..

@psolano



I appreciate that FRICKINAWESOME and stargirl22 may not like the design, which is fine - each to their own. I welcome even negative opinions and comments that are at least constructive, but I don't think you should go around saying stuff like that without at least the material you are referring to. I highly doubt that the design you saw was "just like" this one. I can assure you that I have not seen any such design or one like it. Perhaps the design you saw had a paint splat and a floral motif - these are popular elements at the moment (hey, I never said the design was ground-breaking).



As "an aspiring graphic designer" you should know better than to throw around unfounded accuasations like that. Could I see a scan of this image, or at the very least the name and issue number of the magazine?



Thanks to everyone else for their feedback.



D x

Scan!!!



I'm sorry. You know I love you.

I really hope you are joking psolano. That "scan" looks nothing like this design. The only similarity is they are both of buildings. Good grief.

@psolano



Dammit, there was no splat or floral motif, I knew I should have said buildings and birds! Seriously though, I am grateful that you took the time to find that for me, as it has put my mind at ease. Whilst Tee Birds is a bit generic, I don't think it bears any more resemblance to that than any of the other designs floating around.