2nd submission... be gentle...

Dunno. Point. That nipple makes me wanna get rough. ;-) But seriously I like the charcoal/griity textured feel. Now about you put the sketch on a piece of paper as opposed to framing it?

Yeah, I like that texture too.

....funny style, bad boobjob........

yeah i agree..the boob looks a bit funny but otherwise it's not bad.

yeah, i think the boob is sticking out too far for the size you made it...
and i'm a girl and don't really want a boob on my shirt... but if it weren't htere, i thikni might buy this.

She's hiding a lemon in her armpit!

Her breast is fine...the nipple is kind of off. If you made her breast just a smooth curve I think it would work better...or at least make the nipple smaller and turn it away from its skyward pointing.

thanks x... you've got some good points, i'll keep that in mind...

....hehe; seems to me that x is saying the same thing as everybody else, but is getting all the credit for being constructive and respectful about it. The boob is wrong, dude, and as headfirst4halos is pointing out, does it really have to be there. I mean; drawing a woman from the back when you wanna show her breasts? Thats gotta end up looking akward. And if I get get that "...oh, it´s just a tee, so calm down" remark again, somebody will be underestermating the value of this forum. 99,5 % of our tees don´t ever get printed, so we might as well learn from the peeps handing out critique. Dixi! (latin for; "just my 2 cents").....

you're right ivan... x took the time to be constructive and that is why his criticizism was taken seriously. one thing i learned in school was that you can't listen to everyone's advice. if you can't take the time to give me points about what is wrong and how i could fix it from your perspective then it does me no good. as for showing her from the back, that was a design choice i made for originality purposes. i can't cater to everyone's preference or i would have this shirt submitted 15 times. i appreciate the remarks... all points well taken.

ugly boob

i think with no breast showing it might appeal to a larger range of people and might stand the chance of getting printed. i like the style and look forward to more submissions

the girl look TOO young to me guys. otherwise 5

Is she holding a lemon in her armpit?

thanks for all the comments... maybe next time

perfect breasts are hard to find - who wants to be perfect when you can be original