Yeah take the flower out. Also I personally would go monochromatic in greens with the headphones to match the shirt and the added plus is you'd have the shirt's green to assist in the shading.
make the flower transparent and blue and repeat the text twice on the back with camouflage colors plus the headphones need to be twice as big and with a gradient fill. then two trees on the sleeves and a white collar out of cocain. that should do. ;)
flower doesn't add anything, but it doesn't make me hate it either. the black line however would be cool to see as the headphone cord and not perfectly straight.
exactly what i was thinking, jacob. a little thicker, and even a plug at the end if you're feeling up to it. also, something about the font i don't like. but the layout itself is pretty immaculate. nice job.
I didn't even realize that was the headphone cord, so I agree that the cord should be thicker or curvier. And the copy is a tad trite...maybe just keep "Listen to you Heart"
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jisela
i agree..cool design but the flower doesn't match..
Joe Biam
Yeah take the flower out. Also I personally would go monochromatic in greens with the headphones to match the shirt and the added plus is you'd have the shirt's green to assist in the shading.
sinferno
dont change headphone color... remove flower
transmute
yeh do away with flower, nice design..i like colours as they are
Nikiloda
Flower out.
the black line is seriously disturbing me, AHHH.
otherwise, very cool one.
paramon
so very much last year
cfaalltheway
take out the flower, otherwise, amazing
retrokillsnobody
the repeating text has got to go
sinferno
no, keep the repeating text, it sets a theme.... no line would make it cleaner.
xshutterbabe03x
i really like the headphones as a graphic on their own. the text isnt adding or taking away, but for that matter, take it away. solid graphic though.
pinksnoflake88
wow i like it a lot the flower... it dosent really go but i like it! i want one!
sublime
4get the repeating text. Just keep the listen 2 the heart part
britannica
yeah, i also thing the flower and the last line of the repeating text needs to go.
I'd like to see the shirt in a blue maybe.
dkair
keep it all it's great !!!
i'd like one ...
koby
I liked it a lot as is. The flower breaks the balance which is gr8.
xtheeyeballkidx
good design, the headphones and the text really take away from the flower! ... strike that; reverse it!
Becca0331
i like the repeating text. it reminds me of a heartbeat... the whole shirt kicks... cept i agree w/ everyone else on the flower
p_Resize
make the flower transparent and blue and repeat the text twice on the back with camouflage colors plus the headphones need to be twice as big and with a gradient fill. then two trees on the sleeves and a white collar out of cocain. that should do. ;)
JacobProtagonist
flower doesn't add anything, but it doesn't make me hate it either. the black line however would be cool to see as the headphone cord and not perfectly straight.
friend
exactly what i was thinking, jacob. a little thicker, and even a plug at the end if you're feeling up to it. also, something about the font i don't like. but the layout itself is pretty immaculate. nice job.
abizzyman
arrows and earphones... who'd a thought?
Kornflak
Beautiful. Serene. I think the flower overeggs the pudding a bit though.
missshannon77
I didn't even realize that was the headphone cord, so I agree that the cord should be thicker or curvier. And the copy is a tad trite...maybe just keep "Listen to you Heart"
Baron Z
yeah please get rid of the flower.
Local Octopus
im sorry but if i see another t-shirt with headphones on it im going to puke,
but the flower is nice.
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