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all the butterflies are interesting, i would remove the white areas like how you have the top middle butterfly. Also, I'm noticing several non butterfly/moths on the bottom.
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Less white, maybe a different color than black. Dark, but with a tint.
Also I'd probably like it better if the butterflies weren't in a diamond shape, and more scattered. |
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Two good movies in one design. Too bad you opted for grey and white rather than the lovely sparkling colours of life.
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I love this. I'd buy it as is, but a lot of the suggestions on here are valid (i.e: more colors. Maybe try with a light yellow and a dark purple or navy, to give it more vibrancy?)
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what is the significance of the shape? its seems somewhere between really structured and a general mass
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Good illustration but I don't even like bugs around me so I won't wear the shirt either.
but giving u 3 for illustration :-) |
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I like the wrap around, but not in such a confined area, make the butterflies more random, like they're actually flying.
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can't tell from the size but isn't that the death's head moth design from silence of the lambs in the center?
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i agree. i love thissssss i hopeee they print this... PLEASE PRINT THIS! the details are AMAZING love the contrast of black white, on blue.... its like a silhouette! LOVE IT! 5$ 5$5$5$5$5$
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thanks for all the comments, yes, i was going for a more "dead a pinned" collection, and yes more like a silhouette. :)
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Very Creative, and uniquely different.....I am sure it would be a conversation starter, like " Where did you get that awesome shirt! I want one !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Love the placement. Perhaps you should make the colours more vivid.
And I don't completely understand. But you get a five. |
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this has to get printed... love the color of the tee shirt as well, havent seen that one on threadless in a while 5$
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The symmetry of the design definitely lends it to a center placement. Other than that, it's also kinda boring.
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actually idiot, these arrent clip art, if youd like to see the original design that i drew before live trace i can send it to you. thanks. ingrate.
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I'm not sure about anyone else, but I would love it only if the placement was centered :S
but love love the blue, still $5 |
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