i cant decide if "action!" is better in the center, or "tribeca." this is my first submission and the rules say to avoid using the name of the event on the shirt, but i kinda like it. both are in my submission for that reason.

something about the lettering being the focal point take away from it, I think. I would've liked it better had the wording been, say, at the bottom left of the green field, or sumpn. Actually, the typographic usage is a bit limp in general... I'd tighten up the kerning, and use a font that works better with the mood established with your color and line-art choices.

love it!!!!

definately want one. Great job!

Make the lines thicker on the fingers. Also try and improve the resolution.

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thanks for the feedback so far. i agree with most everything said. you guys have already helped me as i start to work on another design. but first i need to buy some stuff! i hate that i sat on my membership for so long before becoming active.

i reckon there shouldnt be any text