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Yes, the only thing that reads is 'swallow' and that works against what I'm going to assume is the intent of the design. If that *is* the intent of the design, well, ew.
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"that aching regret" is readable, but probably because I read the title. I don't understand the eyes in the 'a' and 'o'
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finally it's up!
:] i love this one so much what a clever idea that design, green, and you are incredible and this is not hard to read at all $6 for you james :-p |
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i like it what is sayinng, but too much emphasis onthe swallow -so i wouldnt wear it in it's current state. make it clearer and feed my emo!! :-)
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every one is wrong, I could understand all the words perfectly, so you must all have bad eyes. FANTASTIC typography. seriously, you have definite talent for this kind of art. good luck winning! 5$
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No Mister, you nailed it with this design. I was just saying.
P.S. I would love to see this printed <3 fo sho. |
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I love the idea, very very much. But it is hard to read so it looks like a B.J. shirt.
But PLEASE work on the idea as I love the concept. |
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Its a purrrrty design and I know you all agree, its nice to see something other than illustration 'round these here parts!
It's a beauty. :o $5 |
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I could read "That Aching Regret" without looking at the title.
It's lovely. But the way it looks like "SWALJOW" is annoying. |
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awww, i will ease up on you david but only because i like your facial hair and its your birthday soon<3
and about this design... IT'S AMAZING. |
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better than amazing at this point
that smiley face in the 'swallow' still makes me smile :-D awesome job James! [as usual] |
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yes...very suggestive...not sure I could wear it, might get a few laughs off my friends. Typography is executed really well though.
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people have lost their minds
this design deserves higher you are amazing James it's not your fault some people don't have taste |
About my design
http://www.threadless.com/profile/289796/spires/blog/187511/swallow_that_aching_regret